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Ice Lantern

dyes dormant in ice lantern ~ until dawn’s sultry light


12/21/2017
Silent One’s Monoku 1:  Your Best Contest
13 syllables

colorlightmonoku

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Line Gauthier

January 2, 2018 at 2:28 PM

Charming monoku. Congrats on your win, Kim.

Probir Gupta

December 28, 2017 at 4:28 AM

Beautiful ... Congratulations ...

Kim Rodrigues

December 28, 2017 at 2:07 PM

Thank you, Probir! xx

Eve Roper

December 27, 2017 at 8:38 PM

nicely done, Kim, congratulations on your win. hugs eve

Kim Rodrigues

December 28, 2017 at 2:07 PM

Thank you, Eve! xx

Joseph May

December 27, 2017 at 7:55 PM

Congrats on your win Kim

Kim Rodrigues

December 27, 2017 at 7:57 PM

Thanks, Joseph!

James Inman

December 27, 2017 at 12:40 AM

Interesting choice of words Kim, love the way dawn colors can warm the soul after a long cold night.

Kim Rodrigues

December 27, 2017 at 9:41 AM

Thanks, James!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

December 26, 2017 at 11:58 PM

Congratulations, Kim on your great win.

Kim Rodrigues

December 27, 2017 at 9:41 AM

Thanks, Subimal!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 26, 2017 at 10:15 PM

Lovely pen Kim! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2017 at 10:16 PM

Thank you, Maureen!

Andrea Dietrich

December 26, 2017 at 9:29 PM

Very lovely, Kim. Congrats for your win.

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2017 at 10:08 PM

Thank you, my friend! xx

Susan Ashley

December 26, 2017 at 7:29 PM

Congratulations Kim for your top win with this lovely write.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2017 at 10:08 PM

Thank you, Susan! :)

Judith S

December 26, 2017 at 6:21 PM

Congratulations on your top win Kim! Great monoku!! ~ Judy

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2017 at 10:07 PM

Thank you, Judy! xx

Paul Callus

December 26, 2017 at 5:10 PM

This is lovely and creative, Kim. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2017 at 10:07 PM

Thanks so much Paul! :)

Janice Canerdy

December 26, 2017 at 4:02 PM

Paints a pretty picture, Kim! Congrats. Janice

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2017 at 10:06 PM

Thank you, Janice xx

Curtis Moorman

December 26, 2017 at 3:54 PM

Congratulations, Kim on your excellent win! Well deserved!

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2017 at 10:06 PM

Thank you, Curtis! :)

Charlie Smith

December 26, 2017 at 3:00 PM

Congratulations Kim, great work...

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2017 at 10:05 PM

Thank you, Charlie! xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 26, 2017 at 2:52 PM

- Awesome written in one line, Kim - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2017 at 10:05 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! xx

Silent One

December 26, 2017 at 1:25 PM

This is just fantastic, love the second part.. Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest Kim..

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2017 at 1:27 PM

Thanks so much, Silent! Honored!

Supraja Kannan

December 22, 2017 at 1:08 AM

Wow... This is a brilliant Monoku... Reads like a winner...

Kim Rodrigues

December 22, 2017 at 7:18 AM

Thank you, Supraja!

Arturo Michael

December 21, 2017 at 6:47 PM

Hopefully, dawn "soon come' before "eyes frozen" Your poem says so much...

Kim Rodrigues

December 21, 2017 at 8:51 PM

Thanks, Arturo! :)

Vijay Pandit

December 21, 2017 at 3:58 PM

Lovely!

Kim Rodrigues

December 21, 2017 at 4:01 PM

Thank you, Vijay!

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