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Ice Lantern

dyes dormant in ice lantern ~ until dawn’s sultry light 12/21/2017 Silent One’s Monoku 1: Your Best Contest 13 syllables

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 2:28:00 PM

Charming monoku. Congrats on your win, Kim.

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/28/2017 4:28:00 AM

Beautiful ... Congratulations ...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2017 2:07:00 PM

Thank you, Probir! xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2017 8:38:00 PM

nicely done, Kim, congratulations on your win. hugs eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2017 2:07:00 PM

Thank you, Eve! xx

Joseph May

Date: 12/27/2017 7:55:00 PM

Congrats on your win Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2017 7:57:00 PM

Thanks, Joseph!

James Inman

Date: 12/27/2017 12:40:00 AM

Interesting choice of words Kim, love the way dawn colors can warm the soul after a long cold night.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2017 9:41:00 AM

Thanks, James!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 12/26/2017 11:58:00 PM

Congratulations, Kim on your great win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2017 9:41:00 AM

Thanks, Subimal!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/26/2017 10:15:00 PM

Lovely pen Kim! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 10:16:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2017 9:29:00 PM

Very lovely, Kim. Congrats for your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 10:08:00 PM

Thank you, my friend! xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/26/2017 7:29:00 PM

Congratulations Kim for your top win with this lovely write.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 10:08:00 PM

Thank you, Susan! :)

Judith S

Date: 12/26/2017 6:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win Kim! Great monoku!! ~ Judy

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 10:07:00 PM

Thank you, Judy! xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/26/2017 5:10:00 PM

This is lovely and creative, Kim. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 10:07:00 PM

Thanks so much Paul! :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/26/2017 4:02:00 PM

Paints a pretty picture, Kim! Congrats. Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 10:06:00 PM

Thank you, Janice xx

Curtis Moorman

Date: 12/26/2017 3:54:00 PM

Congratulations, Kim on your excellent win! Well deserved!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 10:06:00 PM

Thank you, Curtis! :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/26/2017 3:00:00 PM

Congratulations Kim, great work...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 10:05:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie! xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2017 2:52:00 PM

- Awesome written in one line, Kim - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 10:05:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! xx

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2017 1:25:00 PM

This is just fantastic, love the second part.. Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest Kim..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 1:27:00 PM

Thanks so much, Silent! Honored!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/22/2017 1:08:00 AM

Wow... This is a brilliant Monoku... Reads like a winner...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2017 7:18:00 AM

Thank you, Supraja!

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/21/2017 6:47:00 PM

Hopefully, dawn "soon come' before "eyes frozen" Your poem says so much...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2017 8:51:00 PM

Thanks, Arturo! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/21/2017 3:58:00 PM

Lovely!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2017 4:01:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay!