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Ice King Castle

I eat "Ice Cream Castles" from the air Now there are no clouds anywhere The Ice King sits upon his Throne No Queen for him he's all alone Within blue skies the world is clear I stretch my hand to bring him near Climbing upward on a "Ferris Wheel" From luscious lips a kiss to steal He looks on Earth to find a bride Each girl he has kissed has sadly died We know love, from "both sides now" A pleasured moment a broken vow Sad and smokey tortured eyes Within metal cocoon we try to rise His lips so cold my warmth is stole He must find one to quench his soul As the wheels turns, we both shall fall We want everything but can't have it all The ride is over the game is done I can't share our story with anyone He is a man and has his needs On others warmth is how he feeds The Castle crumbles clouds back in the air I dream my dreams I can still smell his hair Lonely is the path some lovers choose I sit with red wine and sing my blues Within the cold there is desire He seeks a woman with ample fire As smoke dances on thickened air I love a lover who isn't there My First poem is Empty Castles, written on July 20, 2014. It was a tribute to Joni Mitchell's. Her song "Both Sides Now" was part of the inspiration. Words from her song are in quotes. I wrote it after looking at a self portrait she painted. I chose to write it in a female voice. My second poem is Ice king, written For SKAT July 28, 2013. The third and forth line of each stanza are from this poem. This poem is for Craig Cornish's; Intermingle Contest.

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Date: 2/26/2015 11:12:00 PM
gosh, this is such an interesting poem. Would be cool to see exactly HOW you intermingled it! like maybe if one part was italicized and the other not. I really like it!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/17/2015 7:39:00 AM
I can't seem to access different fonts on my iPad.
Date: 2/26/2015 11:10:00 PM
thanks for asking our friend to come back, Richard. I always ask but who knows what will happen! He is so missed!
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Date: 2/25/2015 3:52:00 PM
Beautifully penned.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2015 9:01:00 PM
Thanks again. M.L.
Date: 2/25/2015 12:49:00 PM
so expressive Rick with lovely flow you go from strength to strength hugs 7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2015 1:40:00 PM
I'm pleased you like it shadow this took a lot of searching to find the right ones to combine.
Date: 2/25/2015 8:24:00 AM
Awesome write, as one has come to expect from, Richard. Sad, beautiful story. "We want everything, but can't have it all." and is concluded with "I love a lover who isn't there." A 7. Hugs and smiles. :D Kim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2015 1:39:00 PM
You are kind Kim, a big hug for you.
Date: 2/25/2015 8:07:00 AM
As individual poems they are amazing, combined they are over-the-top WOW!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2015 1:38:00 PM
What a great compliment, thanks Monterey!
Date: 2/24/2015 12:35:00 PM
The strength and beauty of your combined words comes out well in this poem. The words flow with style and skill and roll their way from the page and into the reader's conscious mind and soul. Well done. Emile #7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 7:20:00 PM
Wow what a great comment, thanks Emile!
Date: 2/24/2015 12:06:00 PM
Read this one before, Richard...Coming back to post a comment. You are flying high with your poetry....This poem is an example of that....as was your Erotica! :) I remember Freddie's Contest...Both Sides now....You managed to bring this all together for this write. What an amazing write...that last line hits home. Beautiful...hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Eileen I spent a lot of time working with different poems and these two seemed to flow together.
Date: 2/24/2015 11:01:00 AM
I love the two poems, Richard, and they weave together to create a beautiful, poignant story of fantasy and reality...love it!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 11:06:00 AM
Thanks Rhonda, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/24/2015 9:12:00 AM
Nice combination. I would never have noticed that they were two different poems if it wasn't for your words at the end. It flowed well. Wish you the best in the contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 9:39:00 AM
Thanks for the comment and the good wishs. I spent a lot of time finding two pems that would mesh together properly.
Date: 2/24/2015 8:44:00 AM
Really enjoyed this poem Richard...a 7... best wishes , nad!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 9:40:00 AM
Thanks nad!
Date: 2/24/2015 7:27:00 AM
A galloping knight of poetry you are dear, Richard, no castle unconquered would remain before your two-edged pen! Good luck on the contest and a seven!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 8:15:00 AM
Ha ha, you are too kind Demetrios.
Date: 2/24/2015 7:05:00 AM
Magical! A big old 7+++! Really enjoyed this one my friend! Cheers from FRIGID Ontario!!!!!!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Jack, we are the exact opposite warm and sunny. Last week I was in Tofino in shorts.
Date: 2/24/2015 3:02:00 AM
Wow that desire in a man is deeply appreciated,,wild fire cud make it more fierce,, Beautiful writes both n excellently mingled Richard! Gl in contest!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 6:54:00 AM
Thanks Upma, I went through a lot of poems to find two to mingle.
Date: 2/23/2015 10:23:00 PM
beautiful Richard, I really loved these 2 lines "Within the cold there is desire He seeks a woman with ample fire"
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 6:55:00 AM
Thanks Arthur!
Date: 2/23/2015 10:05:00 PM
Beautifully written Richard. GL in the contest! Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 6:56:00 AM
Thanks for coming to visit and comment on so many poems Verlena.

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