Ice King

Have I been summons to your presence , only to be sacrificed.
In the coldness of your breath..i will be put to a icy cold death.
With one word, I exist or not.
It is only you whom can wear your arrogant crown of ice.

You care not at all about my loss in your icy Palace of shallow glory.
I will be forgotten and disquarded , not worthy of a story .
To be replaced by a new form of ice ,  that ice will only be disquarded like I have been.
There is no place in your frozen heart for anyone other then you .
Are you happy with  the cold Icy walls you have created in your palace Of self Worship .
You worship your self Self Ice king , surrounded by Sin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 11:37 AM
Very creative and expressive winning work.Enjoyed reading today..Congrats..Sara
Rain Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 12:11 PM
Thank-you my friend Sara , I let the words just flow as I held a ice cube , many thoughts came to mind !
A   Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 5:02 PM
Hello Yvette, love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA .
Rain Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 5:33 PM
Thank-you , I am very humbled by all your talents here .
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 2:23 PM
- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Yvette! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Rain Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 5:34 PM
Thank-you ! I feel so tiny amongst such beautiful Talent !
A  Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 2:08 PM
Yvette, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT
Rain Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 5:36 PM
Thank-you Skat ! I love your creative inspiration that guides people like myself ! Thank-you for doing all you do.
Morgan Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 12:08 AM
some glaring typo errors, the tale is as good as it gets, thank you for sharing and sorry if i said anything bad
Morgan Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 4:48 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Rain Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 9:11 AM
You have said nothing bad at all , I am expressing old and new thoughts . I find everyone on the site to be imaginative and brave for writing . Thank-you ;)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 8:30 PM
I could be wrong, but the Ice King sounds like a stand in for an "Ex" of some sort? Well I can feel the iciness from here! So I'll have to clap with gloves on, good job on this one!!! And maybe a scarf too...LOL! MC
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 7:02 PM
I'm quite sure I've known some Queens in my time....LOL!
Rain Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 9:16 AM
Now I am editing my replys ! Oh No... you are at the top of the writiers list not " Ice King "list ~ TY ;)
Rain Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 10:58 PM
well , You are very perceptive . I have met a few "Ice Kings " in my World ~ Thank-you for your inspirtaional words of kindness , You are on the top of the list ! Yvette
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