Ice King

The numbness started at my finger tips       As a feeling of power engulfed my 
body        Feeling no pain from the ice         Gives one the feeling of being 
invinceable                     My conclusion after holding the ice till it 
melted.........How do you defeat an opponent who feels no 
pain                            Richard Ferry

powerdramatic verse

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Andrea Dietrich

August 23, 2013 at 12:11 AM

'richard, I was going thru this winner's list and seeing you were on it. I am happy about that, but I have to tell you, this was probably my favorite in the whole contest. I just loved your ending on this one. Congrats!!

Sara Kendrick

August 22, 2013 at 12:53 PM

Holding that ice cube was painful..Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

August 19, 2013 at 4:57 PM

Richard, , love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 19, 2013 at 2:19 PM

- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win,Richard! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

August 19, 2013 at 2:04 PM

HELLO RICHARD, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~

Debbie Duncan

August 3, 2013 at 3:08 AM

very well done ,,, as Andrea said ;}

Richard Ferry

August 4, 2013 at 12:39 PM

Thanks Debbie for the visit

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2013 at 12:01 AM

hmmm, how did you feel numbness at your finger tips? Were you holding that ice in a fierce grip? I REALLY like how you related your experience to the opponent who feels no pain. Brilliant. (to follow the contest rules, you need to put a short note at the bottom telling us what you did) But it's kinda neat the way you combined your poem with that assignment she gave us to put at the bottom of the poem. Your poem serves as BOTH.

Richard Ferry

July 26, 2013 at 2:35 AM

Andrea ..You are the champ when it comes to Soup contests. Appreciate the imput. Obviously, you are very competitive and talented. Quite sure ,you will be on the top of the list as long as you want to be. ..

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