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Ice Crystal Chandelier

His smile was like sunlight sparkling on water
His charisma could make the most distrustful person believe or trust him
Those promises were so genuine

Promise of beautiful home on city's edge
This was like a dream come true
Chandelier of crystal was the focal point
Of that large open front room

Beautiful cut crystal hung sparkling in sun on that afternoon
Once settled and heat came on that winter
The chandelier slowly began to drip
Drip onto that fabulous marble floor

Then soon all that was left a dirty puddle
Dirty liquid on the beautiful marble floor
Needing to be cleaned with a mop and marble cleaner

Charisma just doesn't get it 
Genuine character does and always has been a winner with me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/8/2011 3:40:00 PM
Wow, you said it, Sara. Charisma generates attention initially, but genuine character keeps our attention and wins hearts. Brilliant poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/8/2011 3:33:00 PM
Wel put together piece... Meanings hit home with most Im sure...thanks for sharing your thoughts ..enjoyed..luv Michael
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Date: 2/8/2011 3:32:00 PM
In the world, there is superficial and there is substance...you have penned it beautifully......George
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