Ice Cream Store

As you open the door...
you are momentarily transported
back to an innocent child like state.
Your concentration wavers 
as your senses react like a 4th of July
firework display.
Large, colorful posters cover the walls
surrounding you...
offering tasty descriptions of many of the items.
All the while the scents of chocolate, fruit, 
along with a variable feast of
confectionery delights are taken in 
with every breath.
You look around...it's almost your turn.
You must decide...but it can not be taken lightly,
or simply blurted out in a moment of desperation.
The moment has arrived as you step up to the counter.
As eye contact is made,
your mind gives second thoughts to your selection.
Taking a deep breath, you calm yourself...
you can do this you tell yourself,
as the words start to form.
" I'll have a scoop of chocolate chip mint...a scoop of fudge nut brownie,
and a scoop of strawberry cheesecake in a
chocolate waffle cone dish...topped with a modest swirl of whip cream
and hot caramel drizzle, crowned with one perfectly positioned cherry."
Your mouth waters as you take possession of your masterpiece.
As you turn, you look proudly at the others in line,
letting them see your perfectly proportioned glacial reward.
As you grab your spoon, you waste no time leaving,
changing back into an adult, climb back in your car
to feast privately...like a hungry mouse hiding...
eating the last piece of cheese.

                       P.R.Deremer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/2/2015 11:31:00 AM
Pam, you are something else! Ice cream anyone? Smile. Tu
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Pam Deremer
Date: 9/2/2015 1:23:00 PM
It's good to hear from you again!
Date: 8/31/2015 6:39:00 PM
This is a wonderful story, Pam. So many fun comparisons, especially the ending lines. I wonder why we don't all live at one of those places.
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Pam Deremer
Date: 8/31/2015 6:57:00 PM
Thank you for your very nice comment!
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