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Ice Cream Day

Sticky vanilla drips over his tiny pinky. Rainbow sprinkled lips smile gratitude. His face dodges mother`s attempt to destroy his delight. The waffle softens in his palm, Teeth clenched,he devours soggy leftovers. It is a global warming sort of Ice cream day.

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/11/2009 4:26:00 PM

Its Winter On my island ,but yummy i need an icecream now,chocolate and vanilla pls..lovely poem Robin--Charma

Date: 5/17/2009 8:44:00 AM

Thanks for allowing me to smile with this one. Creative view on an ordinary event--one most readers will relate to. Love the thought of "Rainbow sprinkled lips." Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/21/2009 6:40:00 AM

My major weakness! If it weren't for ice cream, I'd still be able to see my feet. Vince

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/19/2009 5:27:00 AM

great fun! Jim

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/18/2009 10:36:00 AM

LOL..a global warming sort of ice cream day..wicked line..that stole the show..

Leon Wilson

Date: 3/17/2009 2:35:00 PM

Hi and you didn't do that when you was a baby, I guess we all did. Made me smile. God bless. Leon

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/17/2009 1:40:00 PM

Totally adorable! And why am I drooling here? Love waffles with ice cream. : ) Oh my gosh, this is an absolutely precious picture. Pure joy captured in a poem. Hope you took a real pic too! Love, Shar