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Ice and Snow

When the cold winds blow

It can freeze your soul

The feel of ice in your veins

Hoping you can unthaw again

When the snow storm is strong and you can't see

When life is mixed up how can it be

The wind and ice strong and cold

Like the sorrows we behold

The unthawing of the snow

Is like the unthawing of the soul

Each little snowfake of our life

Make up some of our sorrow and strife

So as the drops melt away

And the ice can no longer stay

Let the winds blow our sorrow

Into a new tomorrow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 9/12/2021 9:54:00 PM
Love how you take this in to a metaphoric situation and its positive outlook. Hi Phyllis came back to read your first post on soup...Love it.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/14/2021 3:54:00 PM
Thank you for looking at my first poem posted on the soup. It was a long time ago. love phyl
Date: 11/4/2013 3:56:00 PM
love this, Phyll - so full of hope. Hope you're having a wonderful week, my friend x
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Date: 11/3/2013 12:05:00 AM
Phyllis, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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Date: 11/2/2013 7:51:00 PM
hey, you got a really great one featured here today. Congrats, My friend.
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Date: 11/2/2013 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. This is simply lovely and full of hope.
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Date: 4/13/2013 9:27:00 PM
Well I do love this ;}
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:31:00 AM
love this - and such a lovely message, Phyll
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Date: 3/3/2013 12:18:00 PM
Phyllis just looking at people's first poem, I like this one a lot....David
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Date: 2/19/2013 10:30:00 AM
Dear Phyllis, A beautiful First POEM on the SOUP. A tale of Life with the hope of tomorrow Superb Write. Sorry I have not written to YOU for so long I have done that to a lot of the POETESS' and POETS I Admire I'm feeling much better as I was told I'm in remission(for now)LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 10/15/2010 3:27:00 PM
I like to view poets first poems sometimes, and I am happy I viewed this one, just grand and wonderful and I want to thank you for all your comments on my poetry~~
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Date: 10/14/2010 8:42:00 PM
this is really nice, Phyllis, AS I looked for poems to comment on, I realized I had commented probably to every poem on your current page of poetry. Gosh, YOUR name starts with P. I had gone thru the premium members and thought I caught all the people with names I could use in my little acrostic you just read! Then when I saw your name in the comment box just now I realized I had missed your name. Sorry about that. I missed a few others too! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/30/2009 3:54:00 PM
Really like the last two lines. It says there is hope. Keep writing. Sara
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