Notes About The Poem

 

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A Jinjagoliath poem:
27th August 2023 
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Contest: No 1239 New Poem
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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Ice

Brain freeze
Cool breeze
Numb hands
White trees

Winter vibe
Outside
Summer hearts
Death slide

Super cool 
Plunge pool
Thin ice
Skating fool

Split whole
No  control
Broken hearted
Lost soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 7:55 PM
Well done! Became a very sad story!
Grieves Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 9:14 PM
Kim.. sometimes Winter comes too early. Always appreciate your comments x
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