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A Jinjagoliath poem:
27th August 2023 
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Contest: No 1239 New Poem
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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Listen to poem:
Brain freeze Cool breeze Numb hands White trees Winter vibe Outside Summer hearts Death slide Super cool Plunge pool Thin ice Skating fool Split whole No control Broken hearted Lost soul

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Date: 8/26/2023 7:55:00 PM
Well done! Became a very sad story!
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Christopher Grieves
Date: 8/26/2023 9:14:00 PM
Kim.. sometimes Winter comes too early. Always appreciate your comments x

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