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Ian

Who knew that a hurricane named 'Ian' could be something to fear. Most Ian's are harmless, perhaps a little dull. The water is surging in Florida Jacuzzi's. It's gonna be bad. It's important to name bad things with bad sounding names. Cat 4 monsters should be labeled correctly. I hope the folks down there are okay, but I want to re-name Ian something like :- Gore-squishing-ghastly-gutter-beast, or maybe Agnes never liked that gal.

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Date: 9/28/2022 11:57:00 PM
The Agnes idea is great! I agree. Actually the whole smooth-talking Ianish thing is worrying. I don't know when to be afraid! Say Hi to Ohio. I'm from Salem. Elizabeth
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Eric Ashford
Date: 9/29/2022 1:31:00 PM
Thanks for the feedback Elizabeth. I agree of course. Say Hi to MA for me.
Date: 9/28/2022 10:26:00 AM
Love the renaming! Be safe! Kill the monster!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 9/28/2022 12:35:00 PM
Thanks Kim. I'm in Ohio watching it all today.

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