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Put yourself in their shoes contest - Sponsor: Eve Roper

August 7, 2023

I Yearn To Wander

My friends are happy gleaning fields of grain
but I'd rather read about France or Spain.
I travel through the pages of a book,
remembering each journey that I took.

I long to see more of the whole wide world.
An ocean traveler with sails unfurled,
a fortune teller in a caravan.
I would roam like a gypsy with that plan.

I yearn to wander and want to explore
mountains, busy cities, and so much more.
I want to visit places that exist
in pages of books. I've made a checklist.

My parents say there's a look in my eyes
that I don't bother trying to disguise.
My heart wants to lead a vagabond life
and not marry early and be a wife.

I am only ten but I'm sure they're right,
for I dream of foreign lands every night.
Over lush green meadows I wish to traipse
on lavender hills and heathered landscapes.
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Roper Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 12:14 PM
Thank you for your wonderful poem for the contest. Congratulations on your win,Lin. Eve
Poet Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 6:28 AM
Lin, Congratulations on your win, which is truly deserved, as your poem is a masterpiece crafted with such exquisite precision and beauty.
Richards Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 9:26 PM
This rings so true, I can almost see myself in the yearning for traveling... Congratulations, Lin :)
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 12:28 PM
What a charming poem told through the eyes of a child, a delight to read Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 12:54 PM
Thanks a bunch, Jan.
Woodrow Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Lovely rhyme that takes one back to young days buried in books and longing similarly … enjoyed :)
Lane Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Thanks so much for your comments, Susan.
Willason Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Do like this poem Lin, resonates with the restlessness within. I guess writing poetry becomes the substitute for this wish for other lands, our private escape into an ideal...and even then we can only visit...I take a trip into all your poems. Regards Paul
Lane Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Thank you for your insight, Paul. Through our poetry, we can go anywhere we choose, do anything we dare, and allow imagination free reign to privately escape. You're a welcome traveler on any adventurous journey I take.
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