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I came across this lovely Iris today on the edge of the sidewalk. Had to stop and snap a picture.

 

 

I Would Be An Iris

I would be an Iris
dressed in ragged purple clothes
blooming by the side walk
where everybody goes

I would be an Iris
with petals richly hued
basking in the wonder
whenever I am viewed 

I would be an Iris
to stop you in your tracks
to hold you in a moment
where time does not elapse.

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Date: 5/8/2022 1:24:00 PM
Wow, very nice. "Where time does not elapse" is a wonderful finish. ~Eric
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Date: 5/23/2021 5:41:00 PM
I so enjoyed this sweet piece SuZ. I hope you are well and enjoying spring. Hugs, Connie xxoo
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Date: 5/17/2021 5:33:00 PM
Hello Suzanne ... really enjoyed the story behind your poem and the simplicity of it. Remarkable I reckon - thank you Suzanne - Lindsay
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Date: 4/30/2021 3:32:00 PM
That would definitely garner ones attention. Well expressed. ;0)
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Date: 4/30/2021 11:45:00 AM
When Iris ayes are smiling, sure they steal your heart away ...Aloha! Rico
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Date: 4/30/2021 7:52:00 AM
A beautiful flower it is too Suz, amazes me how they manage to survive so long on the sidewalk. Have a great weekend. Tom
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Date: 4/30/2021 5:00:00 AM
Your poem as beautiful as the Iris it praises. You certainly held my moment in its rich hues, SuZ.
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Date: 4/29/2021 8:28:00 PM
Very cool Suzanne! I really like your flower poems!
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Date: 4/29/2021 5:18:00 PM
...and a beautiful flower you would be, SuZ. I love the simplicity and the content. Hoping you are well.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/29/2021 5:45:00 PM
Many thanks Daniel: It was an inspiring flower and I was wondering where I could take this as a poem. So glad you enjoyed it. Best, SuZ
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