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I Would Be a Radiant Mirror

Awe- struck, I gape at your solicitous disposition ! Raffish looking epitome~ combing hair staring at my eye, After you complete,express to me:will listen being nigh; Desperately anxious to enlighten your day with ease, lmitating cute little actions of yours,I find peace; Astonishing romantic tone you own , Never will fade the smile that you shown; Talking to you any time residing in your room. Most often to be known as your replica,pal I seem magical glistening on the wall.. Reflecting your beauty and emotions in all; Realistically swallow you, if stood front of me at any cost, Ouch...cold I freeze when your inside me like a frost; Real relationship to be forged with mutual trust. 13-6-2020 Note:Non Human Poetry Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke Placed as Honorable Mention in the Contest. Note:STRAND NO 800 ,any theme,any form FINALE Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/15/2020 3:52:00 PM

Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work V. Deepa

V. Deepa
Date: 6/16/2020 3:18:00 AM

Hello sir, Thanks a bunch for your soulful appreciation and encouragement.:-) I am glad that you loved this work of mine..:-) Best wishes for all your works too.Keep writing. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/13/2020 1:22:00 PM

Hello Deepa, a beautiful poem created by you. As i read I was wondering how it would end. Enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2020 10:10:00 AM

Hello Deepa, You never know when an idea will come. tired or not. Enjoy your day my friend. Love Darlene

V. Deepa
Date: 6/13/2020 1:34:00 PM

I think it's noon there. So wish you to enjoy your day. Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)

V. Deepa
Date: 6/13/2020 1:32:00 PM

Hai mam, Thankyou very much:-) I am pleased to know that you enjoyed it. As I didn't get sleep I logged in just few minute ago to find this theme. Immediately came the flow of these words from mind and I typed it on spot.:-)Now I will get back to sleep as it's midnight here.