I Would Be a Radiant Mirror

Awe- struck, I gape at your solicitous disposition !


Raffish looking epitome~ combing hair staring at my 
                                               eye,
After you complete,express to me:will listen being    
                                              nigh;
Desperately anxious to enlighten your day with ease,
lmitating cute little actions of yours,I find peace;
Astonishing romantic tone you own ,
Never will fade the smile that you shown;
Talking to you any time residing in your room.

Most often to be known as your replica,pal
I seem magical glistening on the wall..
Reflecting your beauty and emotions in all;
Realistically swallow you, if stood front of me at any 
                                              cost,
Ouch...cold I freeze when your inside me like a frost;
Real relationship to be forged with mutual trust.

13-6-2020

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Makama Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 3:52 PM
Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work V. Deepa
Deepa Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 3:18 AM
Hello sir, Thanks a bunch for your soulful appreciation and encouragement.:-) I am glad that you loved this work of mine..:-) Best wishes for all your works too.Keep writing. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Hello Deepa, a beautiful poem created by you. As i read I was wondering how it would end. Enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 10:10 AM
Hello Deepa, You never know when an idea will come. tired or not. Enjoy your day my friend. Love Darlene
Deepa Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 1:34 PM
I think it's noon there. So wish you to enjoy your day. Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)
Deepa Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Hai mam, Thankyou very much:-) I am pleased to know that you enjoyed it. As I didn't get sleep I logged in just few minute ago to find this theme. Immediately came the flow of these words from mind and I typed it on spot.:-)Now I will get back to sleep as it's midnight here.
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