I wore a pink coat

Sometimes the weight of need,
Is just to close my full eyes, 
to sit still, outside the storm!
And be washed in secret silence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Daniels Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 6:51 AM
A beautiful capture of the need for silence, gently articulated in a short verse. Pink sets the tone of poem as a mild colour of the Heartspace. Quite a catchy title & lovely last line. ( ps. Poetic tip, if I may : it is seldom a good idea to have your title the same as the first line of poem. Many regard this as redundant or misuse of poetic space. ) Sending blessings.,Ghairo.
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April 29, 2026 at 9:01 AM
Thank you so much for your comments. They are appreciated.
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