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I Won'T Stop Believing

My darling I miss you oh so much Tears flow like a rampaging river Whisper my name like a melody on the breeze Being together, safe in your loving arms is all I need I rouse from my slumber alone, dreaming you will return to me one day Jan Allison 25th December 2014 Contest: Enchantment Through a Prism Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Song 2: Don’t stop believing U2 Syllables checked with How Many Syllables ~awarded 6th place~

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Peter Dorr

Date: 1/1/2015 4:01:00 AM

Very moving comment as is your poem Jan. We should remember what Ghandi said, "just because some of the ocean is dirty it does not mean that all the ocean is dirty". Jan - try to have a Happy New Year ! Peter Happy New Year Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2015 6:51:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Peter:-) Happy New year to you too:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2015 2:44:00 AM

Congrats on the win and happy new year, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2015 6:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Mehta:-) Happy New year to you too:-) Hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/31/2014 2:33:00 PM

This hits me not so much about death but about parting spirits once tied by love. Hope is eternal and the substance of our dreams. The title says it all. Congratulations, Jan on a fine piece and a great win.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/31/2014 2:42:00 PM

Its actually about a friendship forged on here and although we have never met I miss him oh so much:-( Hugs Jan xxx

Lesley Micuda

Date: 12/31/2014 11:27:00 AM

Jan, such love will win out eventually thru the grief....keep writing and pouring it out

Jan Allison
Date: 12/31/2014 11:34:00 AM

Thanks so much Lesley:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rob Carmack

Date: 12/30/2014 6:57:00 PM

Congrats Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 7:09:00 PM

Thanks Rob:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/30/2014 3:02:00 PM

Hi Jan, Congratulations on your win. Wonderful poem for the song! I hope the New Year will bring peace and happiness to you. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 3:13:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/30/2014 2:15:00 PM

congratulations Jan another fine win, well done

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 2:19:00 PM

Thanks Robert I was just happy to get placed:-) Hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/30/2014 1:14:00 PM

Sorry I missed this Jan. Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 1:23:00 PM

Thanks so much Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 12/30/2014 1:11:00 PM

Hi Jan, Oops! I forgot to rate you a 7 on your great prism. Here it is. Earl

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 1:23:00 PM

Aww thanks Earl:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/30/2014 1:10:00 PM

Back with lovely congratulations Jan! Keep on believing! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 1:22:00 PM

I wont give up hope Paul:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 12/30/2014 12:54:00 PM

Hi Jan! Congratulations on a wonderful win. It is a very touching well composed poem. How cute!....You and I sharing a couple of 6's.... If we split the 6 does that mean we are each a 3? You should have gotten a higher placement but a win is a win. Have a great day and a Happy New Year! Take care. Earl

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 12:58:00 PM

I've not placed in Nette's last 2 contests so was pleased to get on the winners list at last:-) Hugs jan - Earl I am happy to share any step with you - even the naughty step lol:-) Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/30/2014 11:45:00 AM

Wow the way this is going this is going to be your greatest win ever. lots of love, Albert.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 11:47:00 AM

If it was that good would have got number 1 spot lol:-) Hugs Jan x

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/30/2014 11:44:00 AM

and now you edited your flagrant act to cover your tracks. love Charles

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 11:45:00 AM

lol:-) hugs jan x

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/30/2014 11:42:00 AM

I can't believe you just jumped me once again. love Tony!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 11:46:00 AM

shhh dont tell everyone! :-) Hugs jan x

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/30/2014 11:40:00 AM

By the way next week I am going to reveal that my real, real name is Tony Pinnellie!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 11:44:00 AM

oh I thought it was Rodger !!! lol Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/30/2014 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jan. lots of love, Armand.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 11:41:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend I was glad to be placed in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/30/2014 11:35:00 AM

This a stunning write, that I will add to my favs. I will never stop believing in you Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 11:36:00 AM

Thanks so much Armand my lovely friend:-) Hugs jan xxx

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/30/2014 11:35:00 AM

I love you hope,your Darling would soon return,weep no more,congrats on the win Jan and I wish you a very happy new year in advance...huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 11:39:00 AM

It's written with a friend in mind Kayod5 I miss him oh so much so this write was inspired by him:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/28/2014 7:36:00 AM

Very touching poem, Jan. Those we truly love will forever remain in our hearts and thoughts. If a return is possible, then there can only be hope in believing. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/28/2014 8:29:00 AM

This poem means a lot to me Paul - am very emotional for many reasons at the moment but I will never give up hope:-( Hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/27/2014 11:49:00 AM

I came by to read this lovely poem yet again!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/27/2014 12:16:00 PM

aww thanks Arthur :-) hugs jan xxx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/27/2014 1:01:00 AM

Bittersweet dreams penned beautifully, Jan! Good luck in the contest...hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison
Date: 12/27/2014 6:14:00 AM

We have to have hope Rhonda:-) Hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/26/2014 3:49:00 PM

very poignant and poetic, jan. well done!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2014 4:22:00 PM

Thanks so much Ilene:-) Hugs jan xx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 12/26/2014 2:05:00 PM

Aw so sentimental and longing in attachment, for a love gone. Written so superbly, poetically in glamour ink. U are a poetess right? Warm mery xmas wishes.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2014 4:21:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment - only been writing since February - having the best time ever:-) Hugs jan x

Tim Smith

Date: 12/26/2014 10:49:00 AM

Love it Jan..Didn't know U2 did a version of the Journey song.....hugs Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 12/26/2014 11:11:00 AM

You are 'cool'

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2014 11:09:00 AM

I have to say Tim I didn't either but Nette has it down as being by U2 on her contest... I bought the original Journey record when it first came out - the kids at school thought i was 'cool' as I knew all the words to the record for Glee lol:-( Hugs jan xxx

Vincent Flannery

Date: 12/26/2014 10:13:00 AM

Very nicely written Jan and form. Have a wonderful season and God Bless.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2014 11:05:00 AM

Thanks so much Vincent:-) Hugs jan xx