Jan Allison Poet Verse

I Won'T Stop Believing

My darling 
I miss you oh so much 
Tears flow like a rampaging river 
Whisper my name like a melody on the breeze 
Being together, safe in your loving arms is all I need 
I rouse from my slumber alone, dreaming you will return to me one day

Jan Allison
25th December 2014
Contest: Enchantment Through a Prism
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Song 2: Don’t stop believing U2
Syllables checked with How Many Syllables
~awarded 6th place~

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Peter Dorr January 1, 2015 at 4:01 AM Very moving comment as is your poem Jan. We should remember what Ghandi said, "just because some of the ocean is dirty it does not mean that all the ocean is dirty". Jan - try to have a Happy New Year ! Peter Happy New Year Jan. Jan Allison January 1, 2015 at 6:51 AM Thanks for dropping by Peter:-) Happy New year to you too:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta January 1, 2015 at 2:44 AM Congrats on the win and happy new year, Jan Jan Allison January 1, 2015 at 6:50 AM Thanks so much Dr Mehta:-) Happy New year to you too:-) Hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet December 31, 2014 at 2:33 PM This hits me not so much about death but about parting spirits once tied by love. Hope is eternal and the substance of our dreams. The title says it all. Congratulations, Jan on a fine piece and a great win. Jan Allison December 31, 2014 at 2:42 PM Its actually about a friendship forged on here and although we have never met I miss him oh so much:-( Hugs Jan xxx

Lesley Micuda December 31, 2014 at 11:27 AM Jan, such love will win out eventually thru the grief....keep writing and pouring it out Jan Allison December 31, 2014 at 11:34 AM Thanks so much Lesley:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight December 30, 2014 at 3:02 PM Hi Jan, Congratulations on your win. Wonderful poem for the song! I hope the New Year will bring peace and happiness to you. Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 3:13 PM Thanks so much Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Robert Stoner Jr December 30, 2014 at 2:15 PM congratulations Jan another fine win, well done Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 2:19 PM Thanks Robert I was just happy to get placed:-) Hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans December 30, 2014 at 1:14 PM Sorry I missed this Jan. Congratulations on your win. Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 1:23 PM Thanks so much Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker December 30, 2014 at 1:11 PM Hi Jan, Oops! I forgot to rate you a 7 on your great prism. Here it is. Earl Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 1:23 PM Aww thanks Earl:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus December 30, 2014 at 1:10 PM Back with lovely congratulations Jan! Keep on believing! hugs // paul Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 1:22 PM I wont give up hope Paul:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Earl Schumacker December 30, 2014 at 12:54 PM Hi Jan! Congratulations on a wonderful win. It is a very touching well composed poem. How cute!....You and I sharing a couple of 6's.... If we split the 6 does that mean we are each a 3? You should have gotten a higher placement but a win is a win. Have a great day and a Happy New Year! Take care. Earl Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 12:58 PM I've not placed in Nette's last 2 contests so was pleased to get on the winners list at last:-) Hugs jan - Earl I am happy to share any step with you - even the naughty step lol:-) Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne December 30, 2014 at 11:45 AM Wow the way this is going this is going to be your greatest win ever. lots of love, Albert. Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 11:47 AM If it was that good would have got number 1 spot lol:-) Hugs Jan x

Maurice Yvonne December 30, 2014 at 11:44 AM and now you edited your flagrant act to cover your tracks. love Charles Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 11:45 AM lol:-) hugs jan x

Maurice Yvonne December 30, 2014 at 11:42 AM I can't believe you just jumped me once again. love Tony! Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 11:46 AM shhh dont tell everyone! :-) Hugs jan x

Maurice Yvonne December 30, 2014 at 11:40 AM By the way next week I am going to reveal that my real, real name is Tony Pinnellie! Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 11:44 AM oh I thought it was Rodger !!! lol Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne December 30, 2014 at 11:37 AM Congratulations on your win Jan. lots of love, Armand. Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 11:41 AM Thanks so much my friend I was glad to be placed in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx

Kayod5 Kayode December 30, 2014 at 11:35 AM I love you hope,your Darling would soon return,weep no more,congrats on the win Jan and I wish you a very happy new year in advance...huggs Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 11:39 AM It's written with a friend in mind Kayod5 I miss him oh so much so this write was inspired by him:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne December 30, 2014 at 11:35 AM This a stunning write, that I will add to my favs. I will never stop believing in you Jan! Jan Allison December 30, 2014 at 11:36 AM Thanks so much Armand my lovely friend:-) Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus December 28, 2014 at 7:36 AM Very touching poem, Jan. Those we truly love will forever remain in our hearts and thoughts. If a return is possible, then there can only be hope in believing. hugs // paul Jan Allison December 28, 2014 at 8:29 AM This poem means a lot to me Paul - am very emotional for many reasons at the moment but I will never give up hope:-( Hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso December 27, 2014 at 11:49 AM I came by to read this lovely poem yet again! Jan Allison December 27, 2014 at 12:16 PM aww thanks Arthur :-) hugs jan xxx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 27, 2014 at 1:01 AM Bittersweet dreams penned beautifully, Jan! Good luck in the contest...hugs, Rhonda Jan Allison December 27, 2014 at 6:14 AM We have to have hope Rhonda:-) Hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer December 26, 2014 at 3:49 PM very poignant and poetic, jan. well done! Jan Allison December 26, 2014 at 4:22 PM Thanks so much Ilene:-) Hugs jan xx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri December 26, 2014 at 2:05 PM Aw so sentimental and longing in attachment, for a love gone. Written so superbly, poetically in glamour ink. U are a poetess right? Warm mery xmas wishes. Jan Allison December 26, 2014 at 4:21 PM Thanks for your lovely comment - only been writing since February - having the best time ever:-) Hugs jan x

Tim Smith December 26, 2014 at 10:49 AM Love it Jan..Didn't know U2 did a version of the Journey song.....hugs Tim Tim Smith December 26, 2014 at 11:11 AM You are 'cool' Jan Allison December 26, 2014 at 11:09 AM I have to say Tim I didn't either but Nette has it down as being by U2 on her contest... I bought the original Journey record when it first came out - the kids at school thought i was 'cool' as I knew all the words to the record for Glee lol:-( Hugs jan xxx

Vincent Flannery December 26, 2014 at 10:13 AM Very nicely written Jan and form. Have a wonderful season and God Bless. Jan Allison December 26, 2014 at 11:05 AM Thanks so much Vincent:-) Hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen December 26, 2014 at 5:36 AM - A touching and lovely poem my friend Jan - Luck in contest ! - Continued and again .... Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison December 26, 2014 at 5:45 AM Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) Hugs jan xxx

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