I Won'T Give Up

footed straight overlooking you,
star of the west.
where the lights of your eyes
shines in coolest blue.
may I last comforting myself,
a favor I'm begging you.
you're the splendor and love,
never wanted to loss.

deep and wasted, 
never tamed my heart
with you the promise. 
hold my heart profound love,
let it mingle 
through your golden sound.
may you also sing
the spirit of my mind.

for every minute my eyelids lock
the picture of your golden sky shines.
for every chance to make you hold
the foe just come twice.
hoping we're alone
no more other in your side.
keeping a coffee as hot 
as loving you whole,
wishing you'll last.

I won't give up on us,
even though every pain tears us apart.
I won't give up on us,
it's the deepest thing I'll promise my star.
you're the treasure I want to keep
as the earth stops giving breathe
to her precious child.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 8, 2012 at 6:36 AM
Jett, ..everything you write is so nice to read and so sweet!..writer ka tlga cguro ano?..:) ..Anna
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