I Won't Abandon You


 
“When life traverses the path of pathos the beguiled birds fly to show the course out of the feeling of being abandoned” – Quote by Poet If in the flushing garden path you walk entranced forlorn, the scarlet sun of the dawn’s seraphic sky embraces you, you’ll see my heart in the lilac lines of cloud up above, there you won’t be lonely, for I won’t ever leave you. If on the waves of the desert dunes you trudge desolate, trace the melting mirage to the sundown hazy horizon, you’ll reach the verdant oasis sprawling in my olive heart, there you won’t be lonesome, for I won’t ever desert you. If on the golden sands of the satin beach you pace alone, the rolling waves adorn pearly lattice on your ivory feet, you’ll feel my heart’s cadence in the cascade of moonbeam, there you won’t be lost, for I won’t ever forsake you. If on the surging stream of boundless love you float adrift, meander the unanchored life on the plateau of yearning, you’ll hear in murmuring ripples the symphony of my heart, there you won’t be dismayed, for I won’t ever abandon you.

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Date: 5/27/2025 4:39:00 AM
Creative lines penned. Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/28/2025 7:02:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 5/24/2025 10:36:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest "Abandon", Subimal :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/28/2025 7:02:00 PM
Many thanks.
Date: 5/21/2025 9:44:00 PM
Super sensitive write spoken with Heart assurance certainty. Lovely tender images to match subject. Verdant oasis sprawling in my olive heart > unusual metaphor. ThkU x.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/22/2025 7:21:00 PM
Thank you so much for your read and for the wonderful comments.
Date: 5/21/2025 10:31:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "I Won't Abandon You" write. Great quote... "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away..........
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/21/2025 7:12:00 PM
Thank you for your read and comment.
Date: 5/21/2025 8:30:00 AM
This is so beautiful! I love your title and the metaphors in this and the cadence of your lines too, so touching and made my soul stir! I especially love the line "you’ll feel my heart’s cadence in the cascade of moonbeam, there you won’t be lost, for I won’t ever forsake you." this is one of the best approaches to the prompt taken so far! I love everythn abt it! So heartwarming and touching! A fave! Best wishes
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/21/2025 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for your read and for the wonderful comments. Thanks also for faving it. I feel honoured.
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