I Wondered

Last night I lay in the darkness of my room like i always do Me, a dim lamplight and thoughts of you my only companions Everything was still Till I could listen to first pit pattering of raindrops Upon my. Windowsill Falling, falling gently down my amber rose leaves garden. Falling gently ,wildly, gushing , drumming, Like your heart beat on those scented nights in the hallway by the fireplace, face to face I wondered if water shadows were there too In a distant land, in another path and in a different time I wondered if you think of me too,over a cup of tea whilst reading your newspaper, or just sitting in your porch..I wondered.. Last night I sat, staring off into space. My newspaper not opened. My lemon tea gone cold. Everything so still, until the rain started to fall, dripping slowly, rhythmically, then faster, faster, harder, harder, quicker, quicker splattering onto the broken concrete sidewalk pounding like the beat of my heart when we cuddled under the moonlit sky. I wondered do you ever think of me does the moon bring back memories do you lie awake at night in your room dreaming of me....I wondered..
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Horn Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 6:57 AM
I wonder as I wonder out over the plain and Raindrops keep falling on my head keep reminding me of what you just have written. It is truly amazing what motivates us to write the right poems. Right? Everyone else thought this one was your best one. As your poem will float by, They may love it and so do I. Jim Horn James Thomas Horn
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November 29, 2014 at 12:37 AM
First A7, this is so enchanting and beautiful, I do feel a bit sad, I will need to take some poetry Viagra to be able to stand up to this level of writing!!!!!
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October 31, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Welcome to the soup, I am truly impressed!
Roper Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 10:45 PM
Love your write, I can hear the sounds of the rain making and smell the clean fresh air it leaves behind. :) eve
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October 27, 2014 at 11:50 AM
You have to keep writing...I want to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent, excellent and excellent skill.
Yvonne Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 3:28 PM
I really, really, really, really like the two poets who wrote this. I really, really, really, really like this.
Arrow Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 5:59 PM
Tell me what you really think :.)
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October 26, 2014 at 5:30 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Cupids- I choose your first beautiful written poem - I like it a lot!! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Arrow Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 5:50 PM
Thank you A-L :.)
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October 25, 2014 at 7:50 PM
I applaud this excellent piece and extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I wish you happy writings, my friend! Pandita
Arrow Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 5:45 PM
Thanks Pandita :.)
Goudreau Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:51 PM
Very bautifully penned! Love the beat to this read and the depth of your thoughts! You also paint an awesome picture with your descriptions! Bravo! Please read my page ok? ty
Arrow Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 6:33 PM
Thank you Suzanne
Mcdaid Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:11 PM
truly beautiful congratulations excellent piece
Arrow Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 6:30 PM
Thank you liam
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October 24, 2014 at 1:15 PM
Congratulations Cupids on being featured as poem of the day. Verlena
Arrow Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:04 PM
Thanks Verlena
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October 24, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your poetry of the day.
Arrow Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:05 PM
Thank You Brenda my dear friend :)
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 3:35 AM
WOOHOOOOOOOO poem of the Day well done both:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
Arrow Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:06 PM
woohoo :)
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October 24, 2014 at 2:35 AM
- I enjoyed the poem of the day :) - Congrats! - // Anne-Lise :)
Arrow Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:08 PM
Thank You A-L hugs ;)
Helppi Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 1:07 PM
I heart this poem, "water shadows" did it for me, I imagine water stains on a ceiling belonging to young lovers poor in money rich in love.
Arrow Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 5:43 PM
Thanks Dan
Bailey Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 8:06 AM
So so romantic and beautiful. I love this piece. Warm Regards "B"
Arrow Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:11 PM
Thank You "B" ...hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 6:14 AM
a romantic dream of a poem - amazing imagery - its simply fabulous:-) hugs Jan xxx
Arrow Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:11 PM
:)
Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 3:13 AM
I am favouring this beauty..The respose lines to the first part are a killer.Sooo Romantic !! :.)
Arrow Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 5:44 PM
:.)
Nance Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 7:44 PM
I enjoyed this, very well written ;)
Baez Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 6:17 PM
Well wonder no longer, I dream of you twenty four seven and the bags under my eye are proof.......seriously I can't sleep! ;) This comment would be really awkward If you turned out to be a guy
Arrow Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:13 PM
haha
Baez Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 10:39 AM
OK! I won't blame the new avatar just my glasses! :) you're lucky a have a soft spot for beautiful women.
Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 10:28 AM
You dream24/ 7 hmmm : ) ..Leave your new avatar ..No spiders pls..Leave it in the jar : )
Baez Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 10:07 AM
I've been fooled, duped, it's not the first time and it would be the last I guess. I totally blame my new avatar!
Smith Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Haha...half right
Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 3:12 AM
: )
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