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I Wonder Why

Why does a man break his back in labor? in exchange for a short pleasure Or run the dough to eat? Why does he fetch water and waste it on barren ground? why does he swallow loads of fat then suffer the pain or ill?I wonder why, i wonder, why? has his brain been plugged by senselessness? i wonder why.

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Skat A

Date: 1/28/2014 3:26:00 PM

MARIGRACE, CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT

Marigrace Carretero
Date: 1/29/2014 10:16:00 PM

Thanks so much

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/5/2014 3:11:00 AM

Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win,

Marigrace Carretero
Date: 9/26/2016 5:40:00 AM

thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/3/2014 10:06:00 PM

Marigrace, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA"

Marigrace Carretero
Date: 1/29/2014 10:17:00 PM

thanks

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/29/2012 5:06:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Marigrace. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Marigrace Carretero
Date: 11/18/2012 1:00:00 AM

thanks Carol.

Sabrina Robillard

Date: 10/27/2012 7:35:00 PM

Nice poem. Welcome to poetry soup! :)

Marigrace Carretero
Date: 11/18/2012 1:01:00 AM

Thanks so much.