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I wonder, If ever the fruit thanks the tree For helping it grow and becoming ripe. I wonder. If the tree ever thanks its roots For keeping it standing and for the nourishment They provide. I wonder, If ever the roots thank the ground For supplying a firm base to plant themselves In search of food. I wonder, If ever the ground thanks the microorganisms and minerals, For enriching its soil to become Alive. If no-one Never express gratitude to each other Then A great injustice is committed, UNLESS... All of the above is one, And as such, all work in unison for a single purpose: To serve the divine will maintain life! © Demetrios Trifiatis 29 September 2018

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/1/2018 6:04:00 AM

Excellent...excellent...excellent! That was a beautiful piece of poetry.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/29/2018 1:17:00 PM

- A commendable poem in my opinion :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2018 3:49:00 PM

Thank you so much for your gracious comment dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs XXX

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/29/2018 10:36:00 AM

"We are all reflections~scattered thru broken mirrors..." ~^WW^...now if we had some super crazy glue, we could put ourselves back together again lol...loved your verse Demetrios...we are more than brothers & sisters than what we think...^WW^

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2018 10:42:00 AM

True what you say dear friend, WW. What I am driving at here is that although nature is working in perfect harmony, Man, who receives its fruits, doesn't appreciate it! Furthermore he does what he can to disrupt nature's harmony so he ends up destroying what God has built! Thank you so very much!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/29/2018 9:55:00 AM

This is excellent. A favorite for me! Well done Demetrios :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2018 10:14:00 AM

Very noble of you to visit and comment dear, Heidi! Thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/29/2018 9:29:00 AM

A very interesting verse Demetrios, Enjoyable and thought provoking. Ton

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2018 10:13:00 AM

Ah, my friend, Tom! There you are escaping the Cyclone Zorbas! Haha! Thank you so much for finding the time to visit and comment! God bless you!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/29/2018 8:46:00 AM

I love how you delivered this, thought provoking, really - and I love how you ended it because I concur with your final thought. Nature never loses faith and that, I think, is its thank you. I truly enjoyed reading this. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2018 10:12:00 AM

So good to see you again dearest, CayCay! Thank you very much for your precious comment!

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/29/2018 8:10:00 AM

It's a constant thanking going on daily...you can see it in the smiles of nature...All the best D

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2018 10:10:00 AM

The hidden truth my friend, Arthur, is much more precious than the apparent! A second read will reveal it! Man, unfortunately is not appreciative of this oneness of nature and what nature offers to him and instead of expressing his gratitude he becomes a blasphemer of natural order! All the best!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/29/2018 7:01:00 AM

Picture perfect contemplative words of wisdom my friend..yes, all is intertwined..connected by divinity. Nature has its harmony.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2018 10:06:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciation and your perceiving of the truth my friend, Vijay!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/29/2018 5:13:00 AM

"I wonder If ever an avid reader thanks a highly talented poet, a philosopher, a bearer of Love Light and Beauty for the pearls of wisdom, for the unconditional Love and generosity, for the depth of Faith in serving Humanity.."! I'm deeply grateful to you dear Demetrios for being a giver and a server on path of life and poetry.. Definitely a FAV. A fabulous work of art, mind and heart. My warmest regards. Stay blessed always.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2018 5:21:00 AM

Your appreciation and your understanding gives wings to my soul so as to soar higher, if possible, so as to see truths yet to be revealed for the good of Man! Happy i am when even one person expresses such gratitude to me at the moment this gratitude is to be directed to the source of inspiration from which you and I and all our friends try to quench their thirst for truth! Stay blessed dearest friend, Besma! My deepest gratitude for your precious visit and comment!