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I Wonder

I Wonder I wonder about the people who left me Where they all could be I wonder about them every day When I’m at rest and when I pray I wonder if they’re riding high or riding low If they’re just hanging around or on the go I sometimes dream about them and really wonder How can they still be in my dreams When they’ve already been put down under And even though I have faith and believe There are often days when I still grieve I can’t prevent my doubts I can’t stop my fears And I can’t control my own ideas But one thing I know is true I’ll one day be there too

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2016 1:32:00 AM

Hi Andrew,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Andrew Battaglino
Date: 8/6/2016 3:43:00 PM

Thank you so much. I will soon read your poems, Andrew

Skat A

Date: 8/5/2016 9:34:00 PM

Andrew B., Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Andrew Battaglino
Date: 8/6/2016 3:48:00 PM

Thank you. I read your poem "Goodbye" and enjoyed it. I'm a real beginner and will read more of your poems soon. I am truly excited to read them, Andrew

Sherry Beck

Date: 8/5/2016 9:08:00 PM

Awesome! Recently I too have been dreaming about a great friend who has gone away. Your words are comforting and talks to my spirit...Loved it!

Andrew Battaglino
Date: 8/6/2016 3:52:00 PM

Thank you. I am glad about the way my poem touched you. I look forward to reading your poems, Andrew