I Wonder

I wonder if she really feels the passion in my hand
When I touch her, and in my lips when I kiss her
I wonder if she notices the pride in my voice when I say that I'm her man
And I wonder if she hear me with I tell her that I'm in love with her
And that I'll do anything to please her
I wonder if she knows that I've been watching her
And that I clearly hear every word that she says 
She says that she wants the finer things in life
So I wonder if I give her everything that she dreams of
Will I really become her prince charming, her knight in shining armor?
I wonder if I brought her that rock that she wants to sport on her finger,
Send her on shopping sprees with an unlimited credit card,
Or if I took her on expensive trip across the land
Will I look like some random, desperate, hard up man
That's just trying to win her over to stay close to her
But then, I also wonder if I just simply love her with all of my heart
Without all of the material things 
Would she really see me?
I wonder?

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Date: 7/18/2016 3:38:00 PM
I hope the latter....True love is all you need.
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Date: 7/18/2016 6:31:00 PM
Thanx for reading Tim Smith
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