I Wonder

I’d forget the whole world for you If you gave me another glance But you belong to someone else They are so remote when we speak I wonder who you belong to As you walk slowly beside me We both delay and say good bye I think about your skin, your smile And I should not be thinking this What are you thinking I wonder?

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/15/2011 12:59:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this afternoon David. Have a great weekend and I hope you find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2011 5:40:00 AM

Going separate ways is never easy David .. your lines exude emotion luv and tender feelings for past luv.. luv the question at the last line .. life goes on and on.. luv goes into another phase my friend.. enjoy it.. happy weekend ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2011 11:35:00 PM

david, and this is a lucky girl. (mine was just a made up person so he can't be lucky!) nice to see you here tonight!! A rare treat.