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I Wished

In a fine weather In your garden I wept When the gentle breeze blew . When the fragrance felt Of the champaka flower, When a wild pigeon cooed Roosting at the tree branch yonder, When egrets seen flying Towards the distant blue hill In a fine weather I wept In solitude In your garden .

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Date: 1/4/2021 6:38:00 AM
I enjoyed rereading this exceptional piece.
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Date: 10/31/2020 10:45:00 AM
This is beautiful. Looking forward to other poems by you.
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Date: 9/15/2020 3:04:00 PM
This is a beautiful first post here!
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Date: 6/9/2020 11:32:00 AM
Exceptional first poem.
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Date: 6/9/2020 11:33:00 AM
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Date: 11/6/2019 2:22:00 AM
Awesome first posting, Akham.
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Date: 1/21/2019 4:57:00 AM
I'm impressed by your lovely poem, Akham. It appears that not even all the beauty that surrounds you can erase the the longing for what you don't have. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/31/2018 7:59:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Akham.
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Date: 3/9/2018 1:23:00 PM
Poignant like this very much.
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Date: 3/3/2018 2:59:00 AM
Very nice the way you express your words :) Thank you for reading my The Young Girl :)
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Date: 2/22/2016 11:12:00 PM
Akham nilabirdhwaja Singh, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 9:45:00 PM
ANS, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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