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I Wish Your Warm Shoulder your cold shoulder dropped me to my knees why was the weather bad I drove uphill again and again did you know I liked you slope's slippery my tongue slipped on me why couldn't you forgive I'm not perfect my cloth cut unique why couldn't we be friends connie pachecho 8/22/17

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Date: 8/22/2017 10:50:00 PM
Very nice, Connie - beautiful and melancholy - enjoyed it very much!
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Date: 8/22/2017 8:08:00 PM
Enjoyed, Connie!
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