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I Wish Your Warm Shoulder

I Wish Your Warm Shoulder

your cold shoulder
dropped me to my knees
why was the weather bad

I drove uphill 
again and again
did you know I liked you

slope's slippery
my tongue slipped on me
why couldn't you forgive 

I'm not perfect
my cloth cut unique
why couldn't we be friends

connie pachecho

8/22/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Very nice, Connie - beautiful and melancholy - enjoyed it very much!
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August 22, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Enjoyed, Connie!
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