Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

I Wish You Were Around Me

I wish you were around me..... 
 
When the morning begin with a new day
When the day brings the brightness to life
When the life showers love for power 
Then I think of you and I wish you were around me

When the clouds begin to sail above me
When the cool breeze begin to touch me
When the beautiful nature begins to hugs me 
Then I think of you and I wish you were around me

When the sun to sets down in the sky 
When the moon begin to sail in the sky
When the nights are silent and starts it's romantic story
Then I think of you and I wish you were around me

When the love song starts to sing into my heart
When the heart being to purify from those words
When the words being to tell about my love to you
Then I think of you and I wish you were around me


Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Harry Horsman November 11, 2017 at 4:50 PM Your poetry so warm, a joy to read, and yes glad to have your words around me... Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:27 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 11, 2017 at 1:50 PM A pleasure to read your delightful writing my friend, Ravi! Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:27 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Arthur Vaso November 10, 2017 at 12:41 AM Very uplifting poetry, something very nice or me to read at this moment in time. Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:27 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Nette Onclaud October 28, 2017 at 7:02 PM affetionately scribed making me feel warm all over...greeat lines, ravi!.. nice to see yo on my page; thanks and huggs Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:27 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Paul Callus October 28, 2017 at 5:18 PM The will and eagerness to share with your loved one is powerfully expressed, Ravi. In absence the feelings take on a greater sense of meaning. ~ Regards, my friend. // paul Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:28 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Ralph Sergi October 28, 2017 at 11:50 AM "When the nights are silent and starts ts romantic story" Beautiful phrase, Great Write! Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:28 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Probir Gupta October 27, 2017 at 5:35 AM Soft love seated at the end of every stanza ... Her nice contour in the veranda ... Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:28 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Eve Roper October 27, 2017 at 12:21 AM So much love and longing in this wonderful write, Ravi, enjoyed reading hugs Eve Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:28 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich October 26, 2017 at 8:01 PM This is romantic and filled with great longing, Ravi . Very nice. Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:28 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs Ravi

Connie Marcum Wong October 26, 2017 at 9:56 AM Your poem touches the beauty of nature and the romance it instills. This is a work of art my friend! : ) Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:29 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Silent One October 26, 2017 at 8:06 AM So beautiful Ravi... Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:29 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Joseph May October 26, 2017 at 7:00 AM Beautiful write ...best wishes Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:29 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Vijay Pandit October 26, 2017 at 6:48 AM A lovely tribute to a loved one--very affectionate poem--well expressed emotions--great work, Ravi! Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:29 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Maria Williams October 26, 2017 at 6:26 AM What a stunning poem Ravi, I really enjoyed it...Maria Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:30 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues October 26, 2017 at 5:34 AM A joyful read, Ravi! Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:30 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2017 at 3:47 AM - So beautifully written with your feelings, Ravi - Always a pleasure to read your poems - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2017 at 5:30 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love xxxx Ravi