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I wish you were around me

I wish you were around me..... When the morning begin with a new day When the day brings the brightness to life When the life showers love for power Then I think of you and I wish you were around me When the clouds begin to sail above me When the cool breeze begin to touch me When the beautiful nature begins to hugs me Then I think of you and I wish you were around me When the sun to sets down in the sky When the moon begin to sail in the sky When the nights are silent and starts it's romantic story Then I think of you and I wish you were around me When the love song starts to sing into my heart When the heart being to purify from those words When the words being to tell about my love to you Then I think of you and I wish you were around me Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2017

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Date: 11/11/2017 4:50:00 PM
Your poetry so warm, a joy to read, and yes glad to have your words around me...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2017 5:27:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 11/11/2017 1:50:00 PM
A pleasure to read your delightful writing my friend, Ravi!
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:27:00 AM
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Date: 11/10/2017 12:41:00 AM
Very uplifting poetry, something very nice or me to read at this moment in time.
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:27:00 AM
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Date: 10/28/2017 7:02:00 PM
affetionately scribed making me feel warm all over...greeat lines, ravi!.. nice to see yo on my page; thanks and huggs
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:27:00 AM
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Date: 10/28/2017 5:18:00 PM
The will and eagerness to share with your loved one is powerfully expressed, Ravi. In absence the feelings take on a greater sense of meaning. ~ Regards, my friend. // paul
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2017 5:28:00 AM
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Date: 10/28/2017 11:50:00 AM
"When the nights are silent and starts ts romantic story" Beautiful phrase, Great Write!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2017 5:28:00 AM
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Date: 10/27/2017 5:35:00 AM
Soft love seated at the end of every stanza ... Her nice contour in the veranda ...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2017 5:28:00 AM
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Date: 10/27/2017 12:21:00 AM
So much love and longing in this wonderful write, Ravi, enjoyed reading hugs Eve
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2017 5:28:00 AM
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Date: 10/26/2017 8:01:00 PM
This is romantic and filled with great longing, Ravi . Very nice.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2017 5:28:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs Ravi
Date: 10/26/2017 9:56:00 AM
Your poem touches the beauty of nature and the romance it instills. This is a work of art my friend! : )
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:29:00 AM
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Date: 10/26/2017 8:06:00 AM
So beautiful Ravi...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2017 5:29:00 AM
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Date: 10/26/2017 7:00:00 AM
Beautiful write ...best wishes
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:29:00 AM
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Date: 10/26/2017 6:48:00 AM
A lovely tribute to a loved one--very affectionate poem--well expressed emotions--great work, Ravi!
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:29:00 AM
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Date: 10/26/2017 6:26:00 AM
What a stunning poem Ravi, I really enjoyed it...Maria
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:30:00 AM
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Date: 10/26/2017 5:34:00 AM
A joyful read, Ravi!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2017 5:30:00 AM
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Date: 10/26/2017 3:47:00 AM
- So beautifully written with your feelings, Ravi - Always a pleasure to read your poems - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:30:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love xxxx Ravi