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I Wish You Were Around Me

I wish you were around me..... 
 
When the morning begin with a new day
When the day brings the brightness to life
When the life showers love for power 
Then I think of you and I wish you were around me

When the clouds begin to sail above me
When the cool breeze begin to touch me
When the beautiful nature begins to hugs me 
Then I think of you and I wish you were around me

When the sun to sets down in the sky 
When the moon begin to sail in the sky
When the nights are silent and starts it's romantic story
Then I think of you and I wish you were around me

When the love song starts to sing into my heart
When the heart being to purify from those words
When the words being to tell about my love to you
Then I think of you and I wish you were around me


Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Harry Horsman Date: 11/11/2017 4:50:00 PM Your poetry so warm, a joy to read, and yes glad to have your words around me... Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:27:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/11/2017 1:50:00 PM A pleasure to read your delightful writing my friend, Ravi! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:27:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/10/2017 12:41:00 AM Very uplifting poetry, something very nice or me to read at this moment in time. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:27:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/28/2017 7:02:00 PM affetionately scribed making me feel warm all over...greeat lines, ravi!.. nice to see yo on my page; thanks and huggs Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:27:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Paul Callus Date: 10/28/2017 5:18:00 PM The will and eagerness to share with your loved one is powerfully expressed, Ravi. In absence the feelings take on a greater sense of meaning. ~ Regards, my friend. // paul Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:28:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Ralph Sergi Date: 10/28/2017 11:50:00 AM "When the nights are silent and starts ts romantic story" Beautiful phrase, Great Write! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:28:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Probir Gupta Date: 10/27/2017 5:35:00 AM Soft love seated at the end of every stanza ... Her nice contour in the veranda ... Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:28:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Eve Roper Date: 10/27/2017 12:21:00 AM So much love and longing in this wonderful write, Ravi, enjoyed reading hugs Eve Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:28:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/26/2017 8:01:00 PM This is romantic and filled with great longing, Ravi . Very nice. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:28:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs Ravi

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/26/2017 9:56:00 AM Your poem touches the beauty of nature and the romance it instills. This is a work of art my friend! : ) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:29:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Silent One Date: 10/26/2017 8:06:00 AM So beautiful Ravi... Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:29:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Joseph May Date: 10/26/2017 7:00:00 AM Beautiful write ...best wishes Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:29:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/26/2017 6:48:00 AM A lovely tribute to a loved one--very affectionate poem--well expressed emotions--great work, Ravi! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:29:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Maria Williams Date: 10/26/2017 6:26:00 AM What a stunning poem Ravi, I really enjoyed it...Maria Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:30:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/26/2017 5:34:00 AM A joyful read, Ravi! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:30:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2017 3:47:00 AM - So beautifully written with your feelings, Ravi - Always a pleasure to read your poems - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2017 5:30:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love xxxx Ravi