Sara Kendrick Poet Couplet

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Just for fun..Enjoyed writing this one..

I Wish You Could

"Whose woods these are I think I know"
I'll walk awhile in the light snow

Maybe I'll see a Christmas tree
Wild Holly berries_just sightsee

These wood end at beautiful quay
Ocean's song lures to be carefree

The quay is long solidly built_ stores
And shopes with goods along these shores

I'll walk this way though circle back
Through the woods by the hermit's shack

A nice long trek through winter's woods
I'm glad I went I wish you could....

First line a direct quote from Robert Frost"s 
poem "Stopping By The Woods On A Snowy Evening"

#2..A Winter's Walk
Sponsor: Francine Roberts
Contest: Winter Couplet
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M.I.A . December 12, 2011 at 9:27 PM aahh, I loved walking in the woods too if I can. there is something very gentle in your poems that always gives me a sense of home Sara. thank you for your kind comments and Have a happy Holiday for you and your family.

Sarah Seraphin November 25, 2011 at 12:45 PM * "Yessss * I Would Love to Journey Upon Such A Path & Walk * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Sara * Especially With Those As Loving & Beautiful As Yourself * Pointing Unto All of The Treasures Alongst The Way That * My Heart May Rejoice Amid Their Wonderous Splendours * But What Splendours Be There More Than That of This Beauty In Hand * Lovely * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *

Andrea Dietrich November 23, 2011 at 4:30 PM I like how you took off from that famous Robert frost line, Sara. I think you did a great job with this entry into the Winter couplet contest.

Poet Destroyer A November 21, 2011 at 1:15 AM Sara, first i will wish you good luck in the contes.t.. also i enjoyed the picture on the click about the poem,,.. Enjoyed stopping by your poem tonight..have a good one,..LINDA

Tony Lane November 20, 2011 at 3:18 PM Much better depiction of woods than my poem. Thanks Sara. Tony

Jack Horne November 20, 2011 at 11:22 AM I just loved this piece, Sara. Yes, I wish I could take that walk too : )

Michael J. Falotico November 20, 2011 at 11:21 AM Such a nice image when after the read you can close your eyes and see the poem... wondeful entry... luv Michael

Bob Quigley November 20, 2011 at 10:32 AM I like this Sara. Good luck

Nathan D. November 20, 2011 at 10:25 AM cool poem about walking in the woods made me feel like i was right there

John Rhinem November 20, 2011 at 9:57 AM Smile, I Believe I shall for the most, bypass the woods and stroll through Paradises heavenly and Eternal places; Holy Angels by my side! Very lovely verse my dear * Love always, John! *