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I Wish You Could

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Just for fun..Enjoyed writing this one..

"Whose woods these are I think I know" I'll walk awhile in the light snow Maybe I'll see a Christmas tree Wild Holly berries_just sightsee These wood end at beautiful quay Ocean's song lures to be carefree The quay is long solidly built_ stores And shopes with goods along these shores I'll walk this way though circle back Through the woods by the hermit's shack A nice long trek through winter's woods I'm glad I went I wish you could.... First line a direct quote from Robert Frost"s poem "Stopping By The Woods On A Snowy Evening" #2..A Winter's Walk Sponsor: Francine Roberts Contest: Winter Couplet Click on "About This Poem"

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M.I.A .

Date: 12/12/2011 9:27:00 PM

aahh, I loved walking in the woods too if I can. there is something very gentle in your poems that always gives me a sense of home Sara. thank you for your kind comments and Have a happy Holiday for you and your family.

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/25/2011 12:45:00 PM

* "Yessss * I Would Love to Journey Upon Such A Path & Walk * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Sara * Especially With Those As Loving & Beautiful As Yourself * Pointing Unto All of The Treasures Alongst The Way That * My Heart May Rejoice Amid Their Wonderous Splendours * But What Splendours Be There More Than That of This Beauty In Hand * Lovely * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2011 4:30:00 PM

I like how you took off from that famous Robert frost line, Sara. I think you did a great job with this entry into the Winter couplet contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2011 1:15:00 AM

Sara, first i will wish you good luck in the contes.t.. also i enjoyed the picture on the click about the poem,,.. Enjoyed stopping by your poem tonight..have a good one,..LINDA

Tony Lane

Date: 11/20/2011 3:18:00 PM

Much better depiction of woods than my poem. Thanks Sara. Tony

Jack Horne

Date: 11/20/2011 11:22:00 AM

I just loved this piece, Sara. Yes, I wish I could take that walk too : )

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/20/2011 11:21:00 AM

Such a nice image when after the read you can close your eyes and see the poem... wondeful entry... luv Michael

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/20/2011 10:32:00 AM

I like this Sara. Good luck

Nathan D.

Date: 11/20/2011 10:25:00 AM

cool poem about walking in the woods made me feel like i was right there

John Rhinem

Date: 11/20/2011 9:57:00 AM

Smile, I Believe I shall for the most, bypass the woods and stroll through Paradises heavenly and Eternal places; Holy Angels by my side! Very lovely verse my dear * Love always, John! *