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Just for fun..Enjoyed writing this one..

I Wish You Could

"Whose woods these are I think I know"
I'll walk awhile in the light snow

Maybe I'll see a Christmas tree
Wild Holly berries_just sightsee

These wood end at beautiful quay
Ocean's song lures to be carefree

The quay is long solidly built_ stores
And shopes with goods along these shores

I'll walk this way though circle back
Through the woods by the hermit's shack

A nice long trek through winter's woods
I'm glad I went I wish you could....

First line a direct quote from Robert Frost"s 
poem "Stopping By The Woods On A Snowy Evening"

#2..A Winter's Walk
Sponsor: Francine Roberts
Contest: Winter Couplet
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 12/12/2011 9:27:00 PM
aahh, I loved walking in the woods too if I can. there is something very gentle in your poems that always gives me a sense of home Sara. thank you for your kind comments and Have a happy Holiday for you and your family.
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Date: 11/25/2011 12:45:00 PM
* "Yessss * I Would Love to Journey Upon Such A Path & Walk * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Sara * Especially With Those As Loving & Beautiful As Yourself * Pointing Unto All of The Treasures Alongst The Way That * My Heart May Rejoice Amid Their Wonderous Splendours * But What Splendours Be There More Than That of This Beauty In Hand * Lovely * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/23/2011 4:30:00 PM
I like how you took off from that famous Robert frost line, Sara. I think you did a great job with this entry into the Winter couplet contest.
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Date: 11/21/2011 1:15:00 AM
Sara, first i will wish you good luck in the contes.t.. also i enjoyed the picture on the click about the poem,,.. Enjoyed stopping by your poem tonight..have a good one,..LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2011 3:18:00 PM
Much better depiction of woods than my poem. Thanks Sara. Tony
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Date: 11/20/2011 11:22:00 AM
I just loved this piece, Sara. Yes, I wish I could take that walk too : )
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Date: 11/20/2011 11:21:00 AM
Such a nice image when after the read you can close your eyes and see the poem... wondeful entry... luv Michael
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Date: 11/20/2011 10:32:00 AM
I like this Sara. Good luck
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Date: 11/20/2011 10:25:00 AM
cool poem about walking in the woods made me feel like i was right there
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Date: 11/20/2011 9:57:00 AM
Smile, I Believe I shall for the most, bypass the woods and stroll through Paradises heavenly and Eternal places; Holy Angels by my side! Very lovely verse my dear * Love always, John! *
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