I Wish Somebody Would'Ve Told Me

DAVID Ahithophel, my dearest friend I wish you had told me That someday our friendship would end Betrayal would fold me The wise one with whom I did eat Raised his heel against me I trusted you, but you did cheat Oh, why did I not see? LORD JESUS CHRIST The Lord knew whom He had chosen Knew one would betray him Greedy Judas' heart was frozen Yet Christ did not hate him Jesus was troubled in his heart Knowing it'd end like this Each day, it would've torn Him apart Betrayed by a friend's kiss ME I'm glad somebody had told me World friendships never last Only God's love can enfold me Eternal and steadfast
19th March 2023 For Edward Ibeh's "Pick-A-Title Vol. 35" contest
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Gregory Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 4:45 PM
Hi Joana, I find a sense of comfort in your grace fill piece, we are loved by our heavenly father....thks for sharing
Ibeh Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 8:51 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome piece, Joanna:-) I really loved your last stanza. Well-done!
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 6:18 PM
"Betrayed by a kiss", beautiful poem.
Peck Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 9:41 AM
Beautiful writing, Jo!
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 7:43 AM
Wow what a clever approach to the challenge. This is lovely
Pandit Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Your ending stanza spells the essence of your message. A story well delivered--apt for the contest theme you chose, Jo.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:27 PM
Loved the second and third stanzas.
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