I Wish Somebody Would'Ve Told Me

I wish somebody would’ve told me

I wish somebody would’ve told me
That the world never ends
Even when you want it to.
When a black hole swallows you up
On the spot 
When an earthquake leaves you cracked and bleeding
When a wave covers you and you drown
In a sea of deep dark pain.
The world goes on,
It keeps moving, keeps spinning,
Leaving you behind.
I wish somebody would’ve told me 
That screaming is it’s own natural disaster
Yelling into the void of moving bodies,
Is taking a magnifying glass to an ant hill
And burning it down
Pain spreads the farther your voice carries
As you watch your pain burn down the world,
Then you open your eyes and no one has heard you
The scream never left your bloody lips
I wish somebody would’ve told me 
That disasters don’t count
When they happen in your brain.

3/10/23 Contest: Pick-a-title, Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ibeh Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this superb piece, Ant:-) Bravo!
Alex Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 8:49 PM
"The world goes on, It keeps moving, keeps spinning, Leaving you behind" - great truth beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
Agrawal Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Strikingly affective. Wish you good luck for the contest!
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