I Wish It Would Rain

I carry the weight
of an ocean,
behind a hue fashioned
for the burden,
but no water falls.
Cracked Iris temper,
sketchy, dwindling trigger;
Salting my wounds.
Parched cacophony whispers.
No sounds,
only a bitter, restless miracle.
I wish it would rain.

-James Kelley 2014, All rights reserved.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 1, 2014 at 10:30 PM
Hi James, happy 2014... Iris temper, like that thought, gives much imagery to the restless feeling.... Enjoying this write... LINDA
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January 2, 2014 at 2:08 PM
Thank you LInda! Hope this new year brings you joy
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