I Wish It Could Have Been Me Dying

My heart whisked away after your death.
My soul couldn’t handle the disaster.
You were so gracefully perfect.
The way you walked.
Your sweet voice.
I miss
you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 20, 2014 at 4:18 PM
This writing was full of mixed emotion... I'm sorry about what happened that period of time...I feel for you... :( I bet you'll see him or her again soon. -DWB
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