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I Wish, If I Could

I wish, if I could take your pain Take your immense pain and wail loudly I wish, if I could cry your tears out Out until you feel free I wish, if I could carry your wreckage on my back The wreckage of an unkind past and a broken heart I wish, if I could be the one to see those nightmares I wish, if I could be the one to fall into those pitfalls I wish, if I could be the one to get those bad omens I wish, if I could be the one to go through all those aches I wish, if I could replace you Replace you in all your misfortune I wish and I really wish, If you had a more beautiful life to appreciate and feel good about -puvi-

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Date: 2/26/2018 9:49:00 AM
You can still be a friend and be there for this person.. deep poem.. nice to see you posting..
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 2/26/2018 10:00:00 AM
It's for all those who are in deep grief..but I wrote this when I was feeling helpless for someone close..

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