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I Wish I Were You

i wish i were you, knitted like a cotton scarf, multicolored and iridescent wearing from the closet of angels and smiling the same smile that, you smile in hesitation when you see me. if i had a shadow under my eyes and a dimple that never forms above my smile, i wish i had a heart, and i could begin to cry when i laughed so much, poised my demeanor under politeness as if i have failed on my own these wishes are never becoming horses kitumba

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Date: 5/2/2016 10:36:00 AM
This is such an amazing and powerful piece! Well done and a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 1/23/2016 10:21:00 PM
KITUMBA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/17/2015 6:49:00 AM
Very beautiful words my dear so deep and unique , I really enjoyed reading it...hugs / / :D dalia
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