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I wished as a child upon a star
For Christmas to never be very far

Then I wished for a lovers kiss
I dreamed that love would never fall amiss

I wish at times I was not so smart
Wisdom brings disappointment after dark

I wish at times I was not always right
Happiness you see, is about letting love take flight
			
I truly wish one day to be wrong
So that you girl, will cry for me and sing me my song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/23/2016 10:44:00 PM
I hope your wish comes true Arthur
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arthur vaso
Date: 2/27/2016 9:56:00 PM
Thank you Carlene! :)
Date: 7/5/2015 8:07:00 PM
Hope she sings a long and happy song for you. Love is a fragile thing, one day we have it and poof it can disappear. Well done Edith
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Date: 7/5/2015 8:38:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 7/3/2015 12:05:00 AM
Letting love take flight is not easy to do. Sometimes we try so hard that we end up preventing it... I'm sure that love will find you, Arthur. This poem is so beautiful in it's simplicity!
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Date: 7/5/2015 12:04:00 AM
I am a plane crash waiting to happen :(
Date: 7/2/2015 11:03:00 AM
Buddy Art, sweeet but tinge with sadness somehow.. I hope you are well.!!! sending you my hugs!~Olive Eloisa =)!
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Date: 7/5/2015 12:03:00 AM
Thanks Olive. much appreciated
Date: 7/2/2015 10:02:00 AM
Arthur, this is outwardly simple to read but rich on the inside. I had my comments ready to write, but Charm has beaten me to it! I'll limit myself to second her thoughts:) #7 // paul
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Date: 7/5/2015 12:03:00 AM
:) thanks Paul
Date: 7/1/2015 3:52:00 AM
Wisdom can indeed bring disappointment..But Id rather be wise and know the truth that might hurt ,than to be the fool living a sweet lie. Like you,I always wished for Christmas to be here,everyday..I might have believed n stars too,but life is somehow different than fairyland,there is a dark patch to it,but as we learn to find happiness in our own solitude,that would lead to a bright side too. Arthur this is going to my fvs : ).
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Date: 7/4/2015 11:47:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine, believe it or not the message here is not the obvious one! I think Andrea cottoned on to this although I am not sure!!!
Date: 6/30/2015 10:28:00 PM
Sincere wishes straight from heart never fail to turn true Arthur! Great poetry!
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Date: 7/4/2015 11:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Dr Upma A Sharma!!!
Date: 6/30/2015 10:07:00 PM
This one is a bit more than it seems on the surface, methinks! I really like this one, Arthur. You are a Soup star poet to me!!
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Date: 7/4/2015 11:43:00 PM
Thank you, everything is a bit more than it seems, that I write, well unless its a bit less than it seems! :)
Date: 6/30/2015 9:49:00 PM
Arthur, you're just a romantic writing genius.. I love how you set the stage then put on a performance!!
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Date: 7/4/2015 11:42:00 PM
I wish, but I dont even come close to the lyric man!!!!
Date: 6/30/2015 9:48:00 PM
Authur, I enjoyed this piece from the beginning to the end.The title stood out and I was intrigued to know more. Once I began to read what you so masterfully penned I was not disappointed. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Alexis!!!
Date: 6/30/2015 7:56:00 PM
Arthur, I was totally enthralled by reading between the lines of this well constructed poem. Each couplet left me conceptualizing events I visualized happening afterward. A wonderful insightful glimpse into a poet's world. I love the type of art that breathes with a poet's breath! Both poem and picture, Outstanding!7
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:06:00 PM
You are just way too kind Connie thank you!!!!
Date: 6/30/2015 7:49:00 PM
Wow, I absolutely love this! I feel it really,.. I wish at times I was not so smart, wisdom brings disappointment after dark....Babe, so very true...oh this was just so ..fits right.. on so many levels.
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Cas!!