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I Wish I Was Dead

I am fed up with life, The tears I've shed, Wish I could kill myself with knife, I wish I was dead. Sorry mom and dad, I failed to make you proud, I wish I could scream a little loud, The tears I've shed, I wish I was dead. Sorry for not fulfilling your expectation, I'm just filled up with so much frustration, The tears I've shed, I wish I was dead. I know am good for nothing, But I loved the way of your loving, "You're my perfect child you said", But I'm sorry, I wish I was dead. You did everything to make me smile, But I just failed to make you proud in my every trial. Days passed, I was dread I wish I was dead. Now I find myself useless, Sorry for making your life a great mess, It must be wrong the decision I've made, But still I just wish I was dead.

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2016 2:33:00 PM

I hOpE you GeT the Help yOu deSereve,, Shivi:), Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Shivi Sharma
Date: 5/23/2016 11:41:00 PM

Hey SKAT, so nice of u to say that. Thank you so very much. I'm a 17 yr old girl, & trying to find out that one to live & I think the reason is my mom N dad. (: I'm glad u guys are with me. Thanks a lot everyone Thank you <3

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/23/2016 10:53:00 AM

So sad you feel this way, U nEed Serious help, it's a sad poem. Shivi, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Shivi Sharma
Date: 5/23/2016 11:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for your concern, glad you liked it... Even I've gone through your poems.... and they were BEAUTIFUL <3 Thnx a lot again (:

Moon Flower

Date: 5/23/2016 8:08:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Shivi. :)

Shivi Sharma
Date: 5/23/2016 11:01:00 AM

Thank you