Connie Marcum Wong Poet Rhyme

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I Wish

I wish I could concentrate my 
Poetic writing to just one form, 
But that just wouldn't be me.

I need to dip my toes into
Every body of water, 
Every lake, stream or sea.

Haiku is beautiful and abstract, 
Sensationally succinct with
Artful possibilities galore.

It conquers earthly seasons, 
Delights our vivid views and
Trains the mind how less is more.

If you haven't tried a Sonnet, 
You don't know the romance or
Splendor you have missed.

Of Italian origin Sonnets sing...
Pulling on our fervent heartstrings, 
They conjure love in every tryst.

Whether I choose rhyme or free verse
Or Acrostic's strict letter form, or
Write in Etheree's nondescript shades,

I feel there is freedom in my choosing,
To express my very best, to leave my
Legacy before... my little light fades.

© Connie Marcum Wong

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Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2015 at 12:03 PM Oh, I love this superb write! I very much like to try different forms but sometimes I have to do a lot of research before I finally catch on to the essence. Always a magical pen, I love your work! This is a 7! Pandita Connie Marcum Wong July 29, 2015 at 3:18 PM I sure appreciate your lovely comment Pandita. Thank you very much for it and for the 7 my friend. Blessings, Connie

Eileen Manassian July 27, 2015 at 1:53 PM Oh Sweetie....My your light shine for a good long while to come. This is an awesome poem....I do love the sonnet....I also love your form. I should try it again. This is a beautiful piece. I appreciate your visit to me of late. I was in need of comfort. Bless your heart. Hugs Connie Marcum Wong July 29, 2015 at 3:21 PM I am happy to bring cheer to you Eileen. I hope things are better now. I appreciate your lovely comment about this poem. Thank you very much for dropping by. Hugs, Connie

Arthur Vaso July 26, 2015 at 11:27 PM I wish I could read more gems like this poem! I for one am glad to be able to read all your creative and different poem, regardless the form! Connie Marcum Wong July 29, 2015 at 3:23 PM How sweet of you to say that Arthur. I enjoy your brilliant poems too. Thanks so much. Blessings, Connie

John Fleming July 25, 2015 at 12:33 PM Damn - forgot the Seven! :)

John Fleming July 25, 2015 at 12:32 PM This, in my humble opinion, Connie, is an excellent piece of rhyming prose. It is so very nicely structured and just flows off the tongue - Superb!! My best regards, Connie! P.s A Seven!! :) john Connie Marcum Wong July 29, 2015 at 3:16 PM I appreciate your opinion John because I greatly admire your talent in the way you write. I am inspired by your poems and learning from your work. Thank you so much for this wonderful comment my friend! A 7 from you is high praise indeed. Blessings, Connie

BE Bailey July 24, 2015 at 6:48 AM Wonderfully penned Connie. I love it. Keep writing, no matter what form :) Brilliantly penned. Hugs "B" Connie Marcum Wong July 29, 2015 at 3:25 PM Thank you very much BE. I appreciate your lovely comment! Hugs, Connie

Robert Lindley July 22, 2015 at 9:33 PM Great write my friend. If wishes were trees most of us would be lost in massive forests we created! I truly love this poem. Your talent never fades my friend!!! Connie Marcum Wong July 29, 2015 at 3:26 PM I am a fan of your writing too Robert. Thank you so much! Blessings, Connie

Jerry T Curtis July 21, 2015 at 1:13 PM Why do our minds tell us we should be doing things other than what we enjoy. Write with the heart---you can't miss-- this piece Connie is the perfect example ! Connie Marcum Wong July 29, 2015 at 3:28 PM Thank you very much Jerry! Cheers, Connie

Afolabi Muideen July 20, 2015 at 5:50 AM What a stunning write, Excellent.........A.M Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 3:38 AM Thank you very much A.M.

Phyllis Babcock July 19, 2015 at 6:27 PM Ok Connie we are not fading away yet so come on girl we got a lot of writing ahead of us yet. lol So many forms for us to pick and give them our best shot. love phyl Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 3:41 AM I don't know Phyl, time is passing at warp speed for me. I do know that all the great poets here inspire me to keep writing, yourself included! Thanks so mich. Hugs, Connie

Gary Bateman July 19, 2015 at 9:45 AM OK Connie -- Your "I Wish" (TRI-CON) has made the stage lights of Poem of the Day!! Congratulation are fully in order!! I know you know I like your write here very much. And I promise to write a poem using your new Tri-Con format!! Congrats again!! And Best Wishes Always, Gary Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 3:44 AM How sweet you are Gary. I would love for you to write a poem in this form. I am honored that you think so highly of it. Thank you for all the support my friend. Hugs, Connie

Demetrios Trifiatis July 18, 2015 at 11:49 PM Melody unending! Excellent dear Connie and congratulations for the POTH! Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 3:46 AM Thank you very much Demetrios. It certainly made my day! Blessings, Connie

Afolabi Muideen July 18, 2015 at 5:00 PM What a lovely and fascinating piece. Wise write excellent............A.M. Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 3:50 AM Thank you A.M. I appreciate your comment. Blessings, Connie

Connie Marcum Wong July 18, 2015 at 3:11 PM Wow! I went to congratulate the poem of the day and found out it was mine! How delighted and honored I feel, especially since this is a newly created form I have invented I am calling Tri-Con. Thank you so much! I appreciate all your wonderful comments! Aloha, Connie

Eve Roper July 18, 2015 at 11:30 AM Congratulations on you Poem of the Day Hugs Eve Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 3:51 AM Oh thank you Eve. It sure was a pleasant surprise. Hugs, Connie

Alexis Y. July 18, 2015 at 9:29 AM Connie, congratulations on a well deservered poem of the day:-)Alexis Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 3:52 AM Thank you Alexis. Made my day. Cheers, Connie

Jan Allison July 18, 2015 at 9:00 AM Many congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 3:54 AM Thank you Jan. Boy am I having trouble keeping up on comments. This made my day! Hugs, Connie

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 18, 2015 at 8:35 AM Connie, gorgeous poem!!! J can see myself in this!!!~Olive Eloisa Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 3:55 AM Thank you so much Olive. Cheers, Connie

Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2015 at 8:25 AM Congratulations Connie. I have learnt so much since coming here, I see you have as well. Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 3:57 AM Thank you Richard. Yes I have written in many new forms I never tried before. Some were a real challenge and helped me learn. Cheers, Connie

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther July 18, 2015 at 8:22 AM Fantastic refreshing poem Connie. Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 3:59 AM Thank you very much! Cheers, Connie

Casarah Nance July 18, 2015 at 7:11 AM Wonderfully done! Such a great write no wonder it is poem of the day! Big smiles! :) Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 4:02 AM Thank you much Casarah! Hugs, Connie

Harry Horsman July 17, 2015 at 5:03 AM Wow not only a poetry lesson, but a wonderful flowing poem, glad you don't concentrate on just one form, your diversity is a joy to read... Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 4:03 AM Aww, thank you very much Harry! Hugs, Connie

Kp Nunez July 17, 2015 at 1:55 AM I totally agree, Con. The past few months of my poetic journey has been made more interesting by trying out different forms and subjects. At the kind invitation of our contest sponsors who never tire of coming out with something to inspire us, one gets to flex the mind muscles while doing the best to express what the heart can't contain. Love this! Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 4:06 AM Yes, for sure, practice makes perfect, and entering contests really helps one to grow as a poet. Thank you Kim. Hugs, Connie

Terry O'Leary July 17, 2015 at 12:08 AM Not only an excellent... but aso gives insight into your 'wideband' talent and poetic prowess!!! Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2015 at 4:09 AM Wow, I feel honored having this come from such an accomplished poet as yourself Terry. I have always been a fan of your work. Thank you so much. Cheers, Connie

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2015 at 7:06 PM this is awesome, Connie. You know how I love forms and I am so happy you do too. How boring it would be if everyone wrote free verse and nothing else or just plain rhyme without pattern. Love this!

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