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I Wish

Desperately wish That I could feel the same way But I simply don't And that hurts you so badly Forget me, and find true love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/10/2010 11:45:00 AM
i think this is what justin should have told me, nice write.
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:45:00 PM
We have all been there...not a pleasant place! Chin up! Light & Love
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Date: 5/6/2010 12:38:00 PM
Well, sometimes the truth hurts but truth first where it needs to be ..means less pain later..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/5/2010 6:44:00 PM
Nice tanka
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Date: 5/5/2010 6:06:00 PM
Sounds like my friends situation with this guy who likes her, but I don't know I think she's starting to fall for him...Great poem, Hunter. Love Destiny
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Date: 5/5/2010 4:38:00 PM
STRAIGHT TO THE POINT, ENJOYED
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