I Wish

Desperately wish
That I could feel the same way
But I simply don't
And that hurts you so badly
Forget me, and find true love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dowdy Avatar
May 10, 2010 at 11:45 AM
i think this is what justin should have told me, nice write.
Guzzi Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 5:45 PM
We have all been there...not a pleasant place! Chin up! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 12:38 PM
Well, sometimes the truth hurts but truth first where it needs to be ..means less pain later..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Mehta Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 6:44 PM
Nice tanka
Orschell Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 6:06 PM
Sounds like my friends situation with this guy who likes her, but I don't know I think she's starting to fall for him...Great poem, Hunter. Love Destiny
A  Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 4:38 PM
STRAIGHT TO THE POINT, ENJOYED
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