Seventeen Dowdell Poet Rhyme

I Wish

I wish I could be happy
With a smile on my face
With a laughter that’s not fake
I wish I could be home
With a roof over my head
With parents who are there
I wish I could live my life
With things that I see are right
Without people who want to fight
I wish my tears would not fall
With no pain mixed in
With no sadness at all
I wish my dream would come true
Because then 
I could be with you.
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Ernilando Tugaff June 19, 2009 at 12:22 AM Congratulations on this featured poem. Ernilando

Vince Suzadail Jr. June 15, 2009 at 7:10 AM Congrats Seventeen on "I Wish" being featured. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown June 15, 2009 at 7:05 AM Seventeen,congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Michael Jordan June 14, 2009 at 10:17 PM Seventeen - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ

Miranda Agnes Quainoo June 5, 2009 at 2:46 PM Aww,may this wish be granted

L'Nass Shango June 5, 2009 at 9:06 AM I think there are moments we all feel this way. Very heart felt.

Maria Elena Enriquez June 5, 2009 at 8:02 AM Awesome poem. You can feel the pain and sadness in this poem. Keep up the good work and welcome to poetrysoup.