I Will Survive

"That is sad - he had such potential"
"Some people are just that way so they say"
I watched the funeral crowd shake their heads
As if it were no great loss this dark day

I was half grown when they buried my Pa
But the words stung and a tear formed and fell
Still they became a part of my fabric
And were then cast in my brain like a spell

Years came and were used up then cast away
I found that my potential was my goal
And that my survival went hand -in - hand
In life's journey where death played the last role

I smile thinking of that day long ago
It has shaped my actions from sun to sun
As I will be lowered into my grave
I want to "hear" mankind say, "Yes. Well done."


10-9-20
Contest: Will To Survive
Sponsor : Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 10/17/2020 11:57:00 AM
- Survival can be a struggle ... but often it's not about surviving ... it's about living ... - A great winning poem, congratulations Larry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/19/2020 5:52:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise !!
Date: 10/15/2020 8:15:00 PM
I was moved by the emotions of your poem, Larry. Your pensive pen spilled poignant and inspiring ink.. your last stanza brings you full circle into the light. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/16/2020 9:15:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. I appreciate your comment!!
Date: 10/15/2020 5:36:00 PM
Very nice tribute to your pa nd to your will Larry. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/16/2020 9:16:00 AM
Thank you, Linda !
Date: 10/15/2020 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/16/2020 9:14:00 AM
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