Get Your Premium Membership

I Will Raise

Facing the lost in every stair throbbing heart imbuing fear all the dreams shattering before eyes perspired hope fatigued to run miles still am having fire,which not been tired still am having perch,which not lost clutch i will raise i will raise like a sun,like a tide like a lava,like a tornado i will raise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/26/2013 8:11:00 AM
welcome to poetry soup and loved the optimistic energy it spills around.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2013 10:13:00 AM
love the positive you. Vijay. your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT *
Login to Reply
Palla Avatar
Vijay Palla
Date: 7/30/2013 4:23:00 AM
thank u very much....
Date: 7/24/2013 10:00:00 AM
wow, Yes the ascension of you. the stare is deep, and you will rise. Love the work Vijay -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Palla Avatar
Vijay Palla
Date: 7/30/2013 4:26:00 AM
thank u...and am happy to join in poetry soup..
Date: 7/24/2013 4:50:00 AM
- Hello new member: Vijay. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things