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I Will Praise the Lord

Favor shines upon you
Light and sword protects
Eternal grace and goodness
Engulf this heart 
Capture my tears
Capture my sorrow
Flame a hope eternal
The hope of Jerusalem


My first attempt at Parallelismus Membrorum

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L'Nass Shango

June 2, 2010 at 8:08 AM

This is an expert attempt. I sometimes ago suggested to Deborah G. that were often familiar with this device while yet unaware of the apllication ... your mastery proves the point, because the device speaks to a mystic truth, that we have all been saying the same thing over and over since birth, being that we were made to give praise. Your inspiration is from the fountain of beginnings. One love