I Will Never Leave You

I will never leave you is the promise
I've made and if I ever fail you
I will take that hurt to my grave.
What a pleasure its been to have known you
My passion for you is great.

I met you when I was at my lowest 
and my love for you grows fonder each day.
You give me comfort in distance that is great
In you is my wholeness;
In you, is my strength.

You are beauty unequaled before my eyes
The light in them that shines bright.
You are gentle, so loving, so kind
You give me peace I never knew could be mine
I call you " My heaven, my sky" because
Its beauty is vast and its the fairest comparison I can find
No one will ever love you the way I do.

I'm so grateful for you by my side
"I will never leave you" is a not an empty promise but
Something that will reveal itself in time.
I'd be foolish to ever leave you
I wanna love you for the rest of my life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/1/2013 12:31:00 PM
Boy, it's really going to hurt when you guys have a fight. It'll bring you two closer together if you can get through it, but such energy and love does have its consequences. Again I can feel the power.
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Date: 3/7/2013 1:25:00 PM
Nicely done poet
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Madelin Barton
Date: 3/7/2013 6:38:00 PM
thank you Sean I'm very happy to c the well received responses I get....I know my shortcomings but I love to write I'm not an avid poet more like a novice so I do the best I can and also I think too much so I give it a go and see where it takes me I really appreciate the feedback Sean- Sincerely Maddie
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