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I Will Never Forget

I once remember feeling hotter than the summer pavement
I remember the horses racing in my chest.
At the touch the endless silence of winter,
I remember feeling safe in our nervous sweat.
The echoing of the world around us.
The beauty.
I remember wanting to stay.
And if one day the horses grow old and in time the race ends,
I will never forget how we hold hands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/11/2015 7:46:00 PM
This one painted a picture for me, lovely piece.
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Tahirih Montes De Oca
Date: 8/11/2015 11:52:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.
Date: 7/25/2015 11:06:00 PM
Hi, Tahirih:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 7/21/2015 4:33:00 PM
Love this one. May the horses never grow old. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver
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Tahirih Montes De Oca
Date: 7/21/2015 5:17:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 7/19/2015 10:35:00 PM
Hi TAHIRIH.. Your fabulous first write is already being featured this week on the Soup homepage.. Huge congrats and the tip of my hat! -LYRIC
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Tahirih Montes De Oca
Date: 7/20/2015 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 7/19/2015 2:06:00 PM
Tahirih,, a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT""
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Date: 7/18/2015 5:51:00 AM
- With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Tahirih :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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Tahirih Montes De Oca
Date: 7/18/2015 4:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne Lise. I am completely in love with Poetry Soup. Everyone is so supportive and friendly here. I as well wish you great success. Thanks again for your warm welcome :)
Date: 7/17/2015 3:54:00 PM
Hi TAHIRIH.. this is a powerful, well constructed write, that I enjoyed reading today! I want to WELCOME you to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. I read a lot of poems and I'm looking forward to checking out more of your works. PS.. If you have a moment, check out my poems as well. I'm looking forward to becoming friends with those who do (Iron sharpens Iron).. Talk soon, LYRIC MAN
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The LYRIC
Date: 7/19/2015 10:36:00 PM
Oh, I'm cited to have you as a new poetry friend!
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Tahirih Montes De Oca
Date: 7/18/2015 4:26:00 PM
Hi Lyric Man, Thank you so much for complementing my work. I surely means a lot! I am actually in love with this page; I find it that it truly is a fantastic place for all poets and lovers of poetry. I will gladly take time to read your work. Thanks again. :)