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I want to post his picture but I can't figure out how to do it from my file where it is.

Ollyver was a miniature Eskimo dog ten years old when I had to give him up. 

I believe he lived two more years because one night about 2 years later he came to me as if in a dream, but it was SO vivid that it did not seem a dream at first. Later I thought to call Pet Smart, and they said he HAD lived on in other people's houses but they had no information to give me! I guess no one person kept him a long time! I have several poems at Soup about this lovely dog!

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I Will Never Forget

My Saddest Farewell I will never forget the day I bid farewell to the one soul who ever loved me unconditionally - the dear dog I was forced to give up for adoption, and as I left him - the heart-wrenching sound of his forlorn howl. May 12, 2020 For Silent One's "I Will Never Forget . . . Poetry Contest"
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Tor Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 9:14 PM
This one breaks the heart. Very sad. So sorry you had to give him up.
Watt Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 9:56 PM
A tearjerker, and a very fine etheree. I can imagine how impossible that goodbye must have been. Congratulations on your win, Andrea.
Kauffman Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 12:59 PM
Your relationship with this little dog is so poignantly portrayed , Andrea. You had me in tears with your final lines - "a forlorn howl." Congratulations on your winning placement with your sadness exposed for all of us to share with you. Blessings dear friend.
Mishra Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 8:54 AM
Dropping by to congratulate you on your placement Andrea :) you words are as beautiful as your heart is. God bless you
One Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 8:02 AM
Awww dogs do love unconditionally... A lovely sad etheree.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 7:38 PM
Touched my heart! I can imagine why you can never forget the day! Sad, but beautiful poem, Andrea! Thanks for sharing.
Godwin Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 7:31 PM
I am so touched, especially by the second line - such a short line to deliver a heavy duty emotional feeling. Good writing, not to mention effective, Sweetie. I love ya ... CayCay
Lamoureux Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 7:19 AM
This is so sad yet beautiful at the same time.
Milgate Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 7:39 PM
One of the most painful experiences you can have excepting dealing with sick child or worse. Decent last few years I hope. Hard to read, must have been very hard to deal with. Warm thoughts and feelings your way. Very deeply felt poem.
Horne Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 2:09 PM
heartfelt write, my friend - such a sad one
Leffanta Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 1:56 PM
My late wife was like that when she put her Australian Blue Persian in British Quarantine - then 90-days, which it did not survive, dying from a "broken heart". Aloha! Rico
Bauer Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 1:37 PM
you've brought this experience to life, andrea - so sad but so beautifully turned into a poem...
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 11:47 AM
How sad Andrea. Pets do give us such unconditional love. A great entry for his contest Andrea. xxoo
Lawless Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 9:51 AM
Andrea, you are the only poet I know who can make an Ether cry.
Lawless Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 9:53 AM
I don't think my iPad knows what an"Etheree" is
Adams Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 7:32 AM
touching and poignant... I remember you telling me about him... best wishes in the contest... hugs
Vangaveti Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 6:19 AM
So touching!!!
Pandit Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 6:06 AM
Many can relate to this memory you shared, Andrea. Indeed they have feelings and they do not hesitate to show. Truly heart-wrenching event.
Somadas Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 5:39 AM
Wonderful Etheree.. Great write Andrea.. Good luck..
Cunningham Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 2:14 AM
That must have been very hard for you Andrea, we always let ourselves get too attached. Tom
Yamin Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 1:45 AM
Dear Andrea! Very impressive write. Touching. - Mohammad
Mishra Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 12:07 AM
That parting howl haunts towards the end..I remembered my aunt's dog with that lasting imagery. Wonderful use of words in this form. All the best!
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