I Will Kill You

You kissed her so sweet
You respected her standards
You were so adorable and gentle with her
But I never knew you were a monster
A monster that betrayed and hurt
If only I could get my hands on you
To kill you before you can say
I didn't mean it
Are you senile
You meant every word you said
Don't deny it
I'll kill you if i have to
Do you know how much pain you have caused
She is everything
She is nothing like an ugly, lying, ****
You're just a jackass
That's right
I meant it in the worst way possible
Hurt her again
I dare you
So help me God
I will kill you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/22/2011 9:13:00 PM
Let it out sweetheart!:) Why don't you tell us how you really feel.:)) You might want to think about not watching so much svu.:) Seriously though. I understand that kind of emotion. It helps to have a punching bag. The man's not worthy of her love. But the man is seriously lost in the push and shove. He's hurting as he's hurting. And he's lost all his control. It's up to us to pray for them to help them become whole.
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Summer Uchacz
Date: 9/22/2011 9:15:00 PM
I wrote this poem after my best friends boyfriend dumped her, it pissed me off after all the rumors he started to spread, so i came up with this
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