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I Will Forever Keep

" I Will Forever Keep " The crashing waves of the mighty ocean suddenly stopped meeting with the shore no longer providing their living movements that stirs the living creatures on the ocean's floor. The bright stars now dimming their brillence and the earth's moon will no longer shine no sun rise seen tomorrow morning and no windy breezes can we find. Our beautiful planet earth stops its spinning now just sitting limbo in time and space the earth is becoming a deathly chaos total extinction is now upon the human race. I Will Forever Keep our precious memories of the lasting walks together along the sea enjoying the beauty of mother's nature and our living togetherness will forever be. Your graceful presense I will always remember of our life on earth as it used to be the days we lived and shared together these precious memories we will always see. No space nor time could ever take away the love we shared was real and true when life as we know it is gone and over I will have eternity to spend with you... Penned By M P K Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion...

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Date: 3/8/2009 9:07:00 AM
Good flow and use of rhyme. I particularly like the last stanza. Nice one! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:56:00 PM
Well we can all see I can't type today!!!!!!! I meant love Aleera, not A;eera, but it appears I can be too quick on the keyboard....Love ya, Aleera (i got it right that time, lol)
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:53:00 PM
And this is also a beautiful love poem too, by the way.....A;eera
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:50:00 PM
Nothing like the ocean, I love sitting on the beach late at night listening to the waves crash against the sand it's so calming, that's the only thing I miss about Florida, beautiful write thanks for adding more for us to read......Love Aleera
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Date: 3/5/2009 9:52:00 AM
Love is truly eternal and can withstand the departure of the world as we know it so that we let it. Wonderfully expressed through terrific rhyme and outstanding imagery. Michael
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