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I Will Fly

I WILL FLY (HEADS) I will Fly to infinity To look for you . From my cozy living room, I Zoom in to your cozy living room. I long for your winning grin! I will fly joyfully To look for you I will fly, I will fly, I will fly... To look for you. Dalila Agtani 12/26/11 Entered in: Contest Name H-E-A-D-S OR T-A-I-L-S! | Sponsor Nikko Palmario

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Kash Poet

Date: 2/1/2012 3:24:00 AM

Congrats Dalila.Enjoyed the poem.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/31/2012 11:47:00 PM

This had a dreamy touch to it, almost made me think of an angel :) Super congrats on your win, so happy to see you in my winner's list, Dalila! :D

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/31/2012 1:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Dalila. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/31/2012 11:07:00 AM

Good one, Congratulations,enjoyed this x

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 12/27/2011 11:01:00 AM

Hi Dalila,This is an enchanting write -short but impressive. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your uplifting comments on my poem The Autumn. You are very kind. Taj Mahal is in India where I was born. It was built by Moghul Emperor Shah Jahan where the mortal remains of his wife Mumtaz Mahal was buried. No, I don't live close to Taj Mahal.I live in Europe. Happy New Year to you. -Mohammad

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2011 12:03:00 AM

Dalila, 'this is very sweet. YOu say you had done another one for Tails. I wonder if that one is still posted so I can compare the two. soupmail