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I will explain the word 'impaled' this contest's challenge, Holy Grail Though not as easy as you think from this challenge I shall not shrink So, here we go: Time to set sail To pierce an object, that's impale with a sharp stick: First you inhale then stab that thing, try not to blink... I will explain Impale someone, you'll go to jail but skewered shwarma's food upscale Brutus' knife did Caesar hoodwink yet shish-ke-bob's fine with a drink be it cola, wine, or stout ale... I will explain July 22, 2019 Impaled Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anthony Slausin

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Date: 7/23/2019 12:11:00 PM
A perplexing poem but different and creative, with imagination that Gershon just whips up. Good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/23/2019 6:35:00 PM
If this poem is 1/2 of what you've critiqued it as, I'd be more than satisfied. Thanks for the enthusiastic review, Jennifer. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 7/22/2019 9:28:00 PM
That is a lovely explanation, Gershon. Now it is very clear for me.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/22/2019 10:37:00 PM
I love it when you pull my leg. Harder, harder! LOL. :) gw
Date: 7/22/2019 8:09:00 PM
Really fun! LOL
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/22/2019 10:37:00 PM
If you liked this one, try 'Cooking comes naturally to me.' :) :) gw
Date: 7/22/2019 4:23:00 PM
a very clever and creative take on the contest theme, gershon! best of luck...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/22/2019 5:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words and support. Glad you like this rondeau. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 7/22/2019 4:14:00 PM
wow you explained it loud and clear and with humour GW! I have written so few of this form, you make it look easy but its a real challenge, I must get round to writing for the rondeau contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2019 5:04:00 PM
Gee, I rarely get comments like this, just gushing with enthusiasm. Very keenly appreciated, Jan! Thanks a million. Your comment has absolutely made my day! :) gw

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