I Will Be Your Prisoner

I will be your prisoner
when our world stills
When our eyes turn tender
silence can fulfill

Desire will burn slowly 
its love we will embrace
We'll find our eyes have opened
We'll find we're face to face

   To kiss you every moment
    know your every scent
    I'll yearn for you when absent
    These times I will lament

Our love knows every motion
it's slow in pantomime
Our love will grow deeper
across measured time

Softly I will come to you
so softly I will
Warm our breath caresses
hearts beat faster still

Time is in motion
time is standing still
Softly I will come to you
So softly I will

     To kiss you every moment
     know your every scent
     I'll yearn for you when absent
     These times I will lament

I will be your prisoner
When our world stills
When our eyes turn tender
silence can fulfill

I will be your prisoner
I will be your prisoner


1/31/17 contest Your Best Love Song Ever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/1/2017 12:40:00 PM
Being captured by a love that grows stronger with time is such a blessing, Frederick. There is also a gentleness in this poem that comes with maturity. So glad I had a chance to read this lyric. I think you have a winner here and wish you luck in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/1/2017 4:34:00 AM
Oh, I love your lyric, I can hear music in the background too.. I wish you good luck in the contest
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Date: 2/1/2017 4:14:00 AM
- A beautiful poem with a musical chorus, Frederic - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2017 11:18:00 PM
I'm impressed! 7!
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Date: 1/31/2017 5:24:00 PM
WoW! Frederic, This has a lovely rhythm and nice flow as well. You have penned some romantic lyrics. My kind of poem.It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/31/2017 3:37:00 PM
Soo good Frederick, looks like top shelf writing here, could be a winner!
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Date: 1/31/2017 3:30:00 PM
Very, very cool Frederic. This song creates a melody in my mind as I read it today. I really liked this and theme...so very cool.
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