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I Will Be Your Prisoner

I will be your prisoner when our world stills When our eyes turn tender silence can fulfill Desire will burn slowly its love we will embrace We'll find our eyes have opened We'll find we're face to face To kiss you every moment know your every scent I'll yearn for you when absent These times I will lament Our love knows every motion it's slow in pantomime Our love will grow deeper across measured time Softly I will come to you so softly I will Warm our breath caresses hearts beat faster still Time is in motion time is standing still Softly I will come to you So softly I will To kiss you every moment know your every scent I'll yearn for you when absent These times I will lament I will be your prisoner When our world stills When our eyes turn tender silence can fulfill I will be your prisoner I will be your prisoner 1/31/17 contest Your Best Love Song Ever

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2017 12:40:00 PM

Being captured by a love that grows stronger with time is such a blessing, Frederick. There is also a gentleness in this poem that comes with maturity. So glad I had a chance to read this lyric. I think you have a winner here and wish you luck in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Darren White

Date: 2/1/2017 4:34:00 AM

Oh, I love your lyric, I can hear music in the background too.. I wish you good luck in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/1/2017 4:14:00 AM

- A beautiful poem with a musical chorus, Frederic - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/31/2017 11:18:00 PM

I'm impressed! 7!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/31/2017 5:24:00 PM

WoW! Frederic, This has a lovely rhythm and nice flow as well. You have penned some romantic lyrics. My kind of poem.It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis

John Hamilton

Date: 1/31/2017 3:37:00 PM

Soo good Frederick, looks like top shelf writing here, could be a winner!

Chris Green

Date: 1/31/2017 3:30:00 PM

Very, very cool Frederic. This song creates a melody in my mind as I read it today. I really liked this and theme...so very cool.