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i were born'd this way

. i have no control uv it i'm powerless even fear'n it "it" her body "i" friend uv "i'm" mine powerless my

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Date: 4/6/2025 12:11:00 PM
I felt the first stanza, to me it was a true poetical emotion delivery. Regrettably, confusion wrapped around me while reading the 2nd stanza. I think that maybe (hazy) you're saying her body is a friend of yours that renders you powerless? I'm trying here, truly trying! Good crossing paths, James. I'll try another ... CayCay
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